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Old 02-05-05, 01:36 AM   #1
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Here To Stay

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Wrote this to Fabulous:Think Ya'll Know


chorus(1x)
Its Assas-Sin,and im here to stay
Legend in da makin,What else to say
Yall no me,Naw most of yall bitchmade
Katz actin tuff,but sweeta den lemonade
Its da newera,So RV listen up


Verse #1
Its Happening nigkaz,Assas-Sin roamin da blocks
Muthafuka you aint speakin,Cuz ya no im clappN da glocks
Hommie im hot,watch it before ya get rock with semi
Not false avatizing,but who betta den me to rock a hemi
Famz im on fire,not banks but ya know im hungry 4 more
Me,im on da streetz sellin bootlegs before it hit stores
Mic in my hand,Flow crazy son,Do da math im way to genius
What rapper ya know acts like this,Talks like this with a rap like this
I aint stoppin till my pockets stay swole like AC Slater
Me disappearing from da rap,Nope not goin cuz im da mayor
New katz hit RV up with ish to speak,Beef to eat
Come my way wit herb talk,ILL introduce da heat
Its Assas-Sin bitch,So keep in mind dat im never slackin
Trippin wit da bluntz im havin,No wonda im dope at rappin
Peep game yall,Dis kid just beginning a new legacy
So you can duck and hide,Or stand up and walk wit me


chorus(2x)
Its Assas-Sin,and im here to stay
Legend in da makin,What else to say
Yall no me,Naw most of yall bitchmade
Katz actin tuff,but sweeta den lemonade
Its da newera,So RV listen up

Verse #2
Actin tuff,Dont make me get outta line like retired actors
My game aint a Late-Show,but ya know its a Fear Factor
Twizted Government excepted,Now its my time ta shine
Im dat kinda nigka to say hello,Den show ya da glocknyne
Me personaly,I luv yall dont wanna be hatted anyway
Gimme space,Im find till ya approach me in da wrong way
Think ya'll know my style,Touch me and see how da fist react
Switch ta being one of da rookz,Ta merkin day lites outta katz
Yall no were im at,so come see me and cuz i aint budgin a bit
Talkin all dat shit,Im bustin down 'em doors lettin shellz rip
Rearrange ya whole uppa lip,so peeps no who kiss da clip
Yeah homeboi it aint a game no more,Yung but in a grown stage
Check out da pricncess cutz on da jacob,Looks like da Stone Age
Get it,Im sik wit it,Mention my name betta be around nominations
Cuz I said it before Assas-Sin aint goin no were,Here ta show da nation....


chorus(2x)
Its Assas-Sin,and im here to stay
Legend in da makin,What else to say
Yall no me,Naw most of yall bitchmade
Katz actin tuff,but sweeta den lemonade
Its da newera,So RV listen up
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Old 02-05-05, 01:43 AM   #2
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i think its a really good drop
im really feelin it
i like tha structure
and the vocab was terrific
id give it a 9/10
really good drop
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Old 02-05-05, 02:03 AM   #3
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Old 02-05-05, 08:28 AM   #4
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I am a big fan of this peice indeed brother.

DAMN! some real good lines. I loved these two:

"I aint stoppin till my pockets stay swole like AC Slater"

"Famz im on fire,not banks but ya know im hungry 4 more"

there were a lot of good lines but these stuck out.

Your structure was good, your flow was way cool. Vocab nice.
Only quarm, (please take it as constructive critism) is that during the second verse, it seemed to drift a little of the quality of the rest and got a little less enjoyable to read. If you just threw in a couple lines like the two above wud have remedied that.

But it was cool. 8/10
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Old 02-05-05, 11:34 AM   #5
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^aight Thnx Dex And Godfatha For Ya Honest Feedback...still Uppin For This To Be Nominated...~1~
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Old 02-05-05, 12:52 PM   #6
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8.5/10, good wordplay, structure was hot, chorus was a lil' u know especially that lemonade line but this is hot
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Old 02-05-05, 01:11 PM   #7
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^^thnx...still uppin for nominations and feedback....
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Old 02-05-05, 04:35 PM   #8
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Uppin For Some Feedback
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Old 02-05-05, 07:25 PM   #9
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uppin for feddback...
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Old 02-06-05, 03:43 PM   #10
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leave some feedback sitaz...
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Old 02-07-05, 07:08 PM   #11
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uppin this for feedback and nomanations...
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Old 02-07-05, 07:14 PM   #12
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dam, can the man get some feedback? lol

nice drop..some heat right there.
i got 99% of it cept for this one line here.

Quote:
I aint stoppin till my pockets stay swole like AC Slater



^^^ i know who ac slater was, but what this mean? u mean swole as in muscular or his pockets were swole? im lost...holla..

good drop though... 8/10
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Old 02-07-05, 07:57 PM   #13
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HAHA^^every gets that line but i guess you dont..well like ALOT of moeny in your pocket..i aint stoppin till my pockets stay swole like AC Slater..so really what im sayin is IM NOT STOOPIN TILL I GET ALOT OF MONEY IN MY POCKET...get it now....swole as in big bucks...~1~
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Old 02-07-05, 10:36 PM   #14
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i get what your saying...but whats the meta?

my pockets are swole like a.c. slater...meaning your pockets stay swole like ac slater stays muscular?...
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Old 02-07-05, 10:38 PM   #15
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yeah...AC Slater is musculur..musculur = swole....pockets stay swole like AC Slater..AC Slater swole..get it now...
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