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Old 02-08-05, 02:54 PM   #16
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Old 02-09-05, 02:12 PM   #17
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pretty good flows well the words you used were alot diffrent not so long but they're something most people wouldnt think of so i guess thats good vocab, good stucture some alright emotion not really there most of it but not bad for emotion the creativty was hella ther and the imagery was alright but it was good...good peice

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Old 02-09-05, 03:42 PM   #18
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Lol At Prev Reply............... Gud Drop 8/10, Gud Concpt An Wordplay,,,,,, Lmao At The Ac Slater Explanation.....lol I Think We Get It Now Afta Ur Thurough Explanation .........hot Verses.........keep It Up .stay Real
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Old 02-12-05, 08:38 PM   #19
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4sho katz..im back after a week...and thankz for da feedback...~1~
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Old 02-14-05, 12:29 PM   #20
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Old 02-15-05, 06:33 PM   #21
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uppin for feedback still..and nominate it famz...
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Old 02-15-05, 06:37 PM   #22
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Old 02-15-05, 11:42 PM   #23
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this was cool pro, had some good flow and i liked the loyd banks line and shit, has some good structure, really i would ask you to change is the hook ya feel?
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