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5 | 62.50% |
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3 | 37.50% |
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Evolution
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Banned: Biting
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Evolution
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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This was feedback posted for E.C
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checking polls i think u won.......................
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 3E91 F3D5
Voted For: E.C
E.C 15 minuts to murk you, and you still think your from pissvilla, dont take your anger out on me becuz your mum looks like godzilla, ^good opener your age is 300 personally i think its time to put down the keyborad, kill you with a phone cord, after 5 battles you'll want yer battle stats restored, ^okay okay it doesnt take much to beat you, only a little punch like below, fucking faggot, you cant rap you shudda gave up 300 years ago, ^hehe,nice E.C comeing through once again am i burning your mouth hot sauce, lets get your real age, 10? 11? put it this way your not old enough for sexual intercource, ^funny ive been here before, a prick that thinks he's ill until some one puts him down, this time he'll frown when he relizes E.C burried him under the ground, ^not feelin closer Vocab was tight,structure is good and was feeling your flow.Kinda fell off in last bar but overall you stayed consistent with the punches and personals.Bit more creativity maybe in next battle but this was good for sure... Hot Sauce You bein 'undefeated' is JUST~A~JINX, take a 'gat to a puzzle' but still couldn't 'BUST~A~PIECE'// Get 'swept off the floor' like i DUST~YA~FEET, lyrical 'Saddam' to take over 'nations' and now you can't 'TRUST~YA~PEEPS// ^decent opener I'm known to 'kill more cats' than your LOCAL~POUND, strangle this bitch and distort his VOCAL~SOUNDS// Got you in a CHOKE~HOLD~NOW, my 'inquitous liquid flow''ll have your FOLKS~ALL~'DROWNED'// ^okay bar Could change ya name to 'Ford' but ya still can't 'FOCUS'// Betta HOPE~BITCH, that i don't Swallow 'coke and razors' in my 'intestines', cuz i'll 'rip' any nigga up wit 'DOPE~SHIT'// ^self-glorification and no real punch I 'disect time' cuz i'll rip this nigga in a 'SPLIT~SECOND', 'destroy ya mouse' cuz ya CLIQUE'S~WRECKIN// BITCH~RECKON, have this nigga like natives on hot coal, this bitch is QUICK~STEPPIN// ^good one The MAYNE EVENT, coat you in 'odorless deodorant' but your not PLAIN~DE~SCENT// Crack ya skull with CHAINED~CEMENT, this nigga ride dick 24-7 so he like STAINED~SEMEN// ^hmm,not really feeling it I'll kill this 'joker' and i'm not usin 'SARCASM', Sauce gets off like a WARGASM// I'll leave this 'bitch' 'screaming and bleeding' like a 'PMS chick' havin an ORGASM// ^like the last line,was funny I'll 'kick ya ass' more times than an 'Arab' thinkin his 'DONKEY~A~HORSE'// I'm COCKY~WITH~FORCE, i 'kill like a thief in a night' tho you're LOCKING~YA~DOORS// ^closer doesn't do the trick Had good vocab for sure,flow on lock but your structure needs a little work (not feeling the caps and such).Nice wordplay in there,creative lines but you used self-glorification too often.Didn't find that many hardhitting punches and personals,you tried to bring the other cat down by glorifying yourself but that's not the object of a battle.Improve on that part but other than that,was okay...no hate...
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Banned: Biting
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Addicted
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This was feedback posted for Hot Sauce
IP: D286 FEFE
stay up bruh...........................................
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Evolution
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^^ so when i win this time u sure you aint gona re open it????
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Light Weight
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IP: C2DF 7A85
Voted For: E.C
breaks like this: Hot Sauce: open - 6 close - 6 multis - 9 punches - 7 personals - 2 metaphors - 7 Ya verse was cool but i found it a bit of a fucka to read with the capitals everywhere but there was some good punches, no personals, some ok metaphors but the verse was directs at your opponant enough to win you this. E.C: open - 6 close - 7 multis - ? punches - 8 personals - 9 metaphors - 7 Nice verse man. Went at him quite hard with some good personal punches. I like ya style! A good flow thru the verse, a lot easier to read than his and more enjoyable. I think you took this easy. |
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