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02-11-05, 09:50 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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Keystyle, Blah
IP: 21ED 60C1
i'm oh so Authentic, always Eccentric, Creativity to the Maximum
If a nigga neglect his rhymin duty then ya know i'm Taxin-'Em... Niggas stay 'Flexin' on my Style... Like they copy n pasted a computer File... An put it on they desktop for everybody too Witness.. But they cant ''keep up the pace'' like a fat mans Fitness... I'll stick ''Slugz'' to ya skin n have you leakin 'Red Fluid'... They call me the Lyrical 'Wizard' With 'Potions' Like a 'Druid'... My consistancys Fluent, Ya always catch me on Point.. An you gonna try an ''Bite-off-mine'' Like the end of a 'Joint'...! Like using 'Anointment' On ya hair its drippin an your 'Wet Behind the ears'... Ya pussy an you always try n 'Get Behind ya Peers'... I'ma be Like 'Cheers' n Clown you with my 'Bars'... ..An you couldnt ''Pull the strings' For a hot verse even if you was playin the Guitar!
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02-11-05, 02:19 PM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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IP: B334 EBA7
good flow and wordplay...but kinda tounge twisty in some spots...clear that shit up and its good...6/10 fam...holla
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02-11-05, 08:44 PM
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IP: C2DF 7A85
was cool. definately read like a freestyle. Some nice lines in there, good wordplay in parts and couple nice multis.
"I'll stick ''Slugz'' to ya skin n have you leakin 'Red Fluid'... They call me the Lyrical 'Wizard' With 'Potions' Like a 'Druid'..." ^^Stood out. Like i said, definately some nice lines in there |
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02-12-05, 09:13 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
Appreciated homeboy
I'll hit up ya open mic with some feed Uppin y'all
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02-12-05, 09:40 AM
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IP: B52C 6258
it was ok, for a freestyleit had some pretty decent ideas in there and some good punches. but structure was kinda messed up n it got difficult to read in some parts nah mean. but its just a freestyle againso theres no need to b all critical n shit. so an ok drop
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02-12-05, 10:20 AM
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**the council**
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IP: D175 0B74
this was nice stuff.....nice structure, nice flow, vocab was aight......wordplay was good
Cause our 'spits' so ''Refreshin'' they thinkin we 'Got Sprite' ^^^feelin this line...keep doing it
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02-12-05, 10:28 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
Why thank you ever so much You sweet little thing...
i cant express how delighted i am you think my raps are hot.......  But on the real, the feedback is appreciated, hit me with a link an i'll spank you... Naw, jokes, send a link n i'll drop some feed on your shit too Uppin y'all...
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02-12-05, 10:32 AM
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**the council**
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IP: D175 0B74
^^^lol sorry i posted that in the wrong place it was supposed to go where your other drop was at...the freestyle
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02-12-05, 10:35 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
aight then
Well my comment goes too the other freestyle you was suppose to post this in then Peace Uppin for more feed y'all
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