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02-13-05, 10:02 PM | #1 | ||||
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Speats- Stay Like You Are
IP: 095F C12B
i seriously adore the lyrics of this track,the beat is ill,only the quality
www.soundclick.com/xspitty so here are the lyrics: sometime i just wished that i never had born its maybe sunny outside but inside its a storm you could never understand the way i feel if you want too,just be stressed,fear and never come clear look at the atmosphere,its about as ugly that it is between my ears ¸its all fuckep up,only bad souvenir, cuz you know,teres always someone tere to put you down like i queer but friends are tere tu cheer you up and create some tears i wished i was a robot,no emotions,nothing to panic about only directions,and never bad things coming out of my mouth but if you one day you think about suicide id be ready to help you and wip those tears from your eyes you dont need no disguise,your beautiful and it aint no surprise and i guaranteed it for life |
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02-14-05, 07:52 AM | #2 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 62B3 9910
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02-14-05, 04:47 PM | #3 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: B28F 779A
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02-14-05, 05:36 PM | #4 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: B28F 779A
upping this so i could elevate
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02-14-05, 07:30 PM | #5 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: B2FE 27A6
fuck people i think deserve feedback im the one whos almost giving the most feedback these days
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02-14-05, 07:51 PM | #6 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 3B27 2020
im feelin this beat for an emotional type track, some nice lyrics on paper..... but ur voice is alil messed up..... canadian right? im sure itll sound fine there, juss for me its alil weird... ur quality is ok pop and click wise..... but it sounds like wen u were rappin that u were movin closer to the mic at some parts, and farther apart on others, cuz the volume varies alot word to word..... also just work on pronouncin ur words alil better.... flow was on for the most part, there was one lil mess up, but thats nothin another record take wont fix....
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02-14-05, 09:00 PM | #7 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 8B05 6098
iight thanks...
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02-15-05, 07:37 AM | #8 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 5260 6D8C
one feed....thanks for fux,much respect,i gave enough feedback on songs and nothing?
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02-15-05, 10:58 AM | #9 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 4EE4 018B
Here's some feed: your voice is strange as hell and the lyrics are worn. It's just one big cliche.
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02-15-05, 06:54 PM | #10 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: B71A 266F
lol is that something good
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02-15-05, 06:58 PM | #11 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 62EA 10BE
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Your voice you can't help, so whatever. But your rhymes are horrible, that's what I'm saying. It's all been said before (only better). Try to rhyme three, four, five syallables at a time. And put some meaning into it that hasn't been done by some stupid ass emo kid.
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02-15-05, 07:04 PM | #12 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: B71A 266F
iight thanks ..
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02-15-05, 10:13 PM | #13 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 8A1E C628
I see your rocking the necro beat... aight
well one thing for the end of the beat... you might want to fade it out next time instead of just having it cut off aight, definatly need some better quality, and flow was off a couple timeskeep up your game bro, and when you write your lyrical content make sure you have enough time to say every word during ur bar so that u ain't rushing during your performance... in some lines you had a little bit too much in one line... keep up the wriitting bro ... keep recording you can only progress, so aim for the top Draxe peace |
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02-16-05, 07:39 AM | #14 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: BB9C A210
thx for the feed
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02-18-05, 11:16 PM | #15 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: 4F41 DB3F
aight the beat it ok...flow needs a lot of work you go off a lot...clarity needs work if i didn't have the lyrics i wouldn't be able to understand a lot of this...you have accent?...French? delivery needs work as well...lyrics were aight...stay up peace
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