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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
02-28-05, 01:46 PM
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Put Ya Hands Up - Ill-Mental, Ace, Blunt MC !Collab!
IP: 0FA5 00E3
just finished today peep it
1st/Hook - Ill-Mental 2nd - Ace 3rd - Blunt MC Soundclick Mp3 lo-fi hi-fi |
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02-28-05, 04:07 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 0825 899A
Beat is nice. good club beat. Jus a little loud, which kinda effected the quality
1st guy-I'm feelin ya verse flow is nice. Same wit ya delivery and presence. you got the best verse on the song. liked the vick line. Hook-Its hot pretty catchy. perfect for the beat 2nd guy-Some parts were unclear, more laid back than the first guy. Its straight tho, like the voice, flow is on point.. Good shit though 3rd guy-bringin back the hypeness. not really feelin ya voice, but you got the energy that make you wanna keep listenin, verse is a little short but its all good. flow and everything on point... Overall-This song is pretty hot somethin that get you movin. The only thing I'd do is lower the beat and vocals a little cuz it takes away from quality. An some of ya addlibs are a little too loud. But this is hot no doubt. Get at me if you wanna collab, and can you peep out my track wit davine? http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179403
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02-28-05, 04:16 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 564F 9464
lol i used to do songs like this...just stopped really ive found myself nahmean so i dont do shit like this anymore...aight first cat flow is str8 content for this track was proper not feelin your voice emotion and delivery was coo...
2nd cat he needs to work on his flow emotion as well and delivery is so so...lines are ok almost bad but not quite there yet.... hook is coo actually kinda catchy... ohhh lmao@this his voice sounds like a cartoon character...his emotion and delivery was prolly the best though verse to short his flow was coo and lines were aight all in all this was an aight joint nahmean ...i just wouldnt bump it nahmean but props to all emcee's
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02-28-05, 04:20 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: 4425 3C10
sener and spul's was betta.... lol
flow fell of on 1st dude a few times, chours is ok...sener's was betta lol 2nd dude was just...wtf, flow was ok, energy was 0, unclear, voice is too loud 3rd dude voice is wack, but he was betta than 2nd dude, lyrics were too basic i dont like how it just faded out...should of had chorus at end or something overall 6.5/10
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