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Old 02-28-05, 04:19 PM   #1
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Old 02-28-05, 05:34 PM   #2
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im uppin for the sleepers all this shit i replied to and i cant get any feedback?
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Old 02-28-05, 05:47 PM   #3
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Aight Check It...

You Kinda Sound Like Nas Sometimes, but Your Lyrics Aren't Above Par. The Beat Isn't Bad At All....Pretty Nice. The Hook of This Song Is Probably The Best Part, Catchy and Pretty Sick. Your Flow Wasn't Bad At All, You Stayed On Beat Well....Quality Is Decent Also.

First Drop I've Listened From You and I Liked It. The Hook Had Me Singing Along That Part Was Nice....Decent Track Man Stay Up. 8/10

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Old 02-28-05, 05:50 PM   #4
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its ok, lyrics are basic or played
akademics murdered this song like a month ago, but u tryed aint bad...
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Old 02-28-05, 06:00 PM   #5
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i used this beat b4 it was on nas's album wen free used it i think kanya made it,your voice is nice,flow is pritty much on,lyrics r avarage tho,but to the point...nice cut overall but u should find a way to stand out more |IMO
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Old 02-28-05, 06:15 PM   #6
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u peeped the wrong track^^ and thanx for the props i spit dumb cause niggas are dumb point blank..its na intersting logic but i dont feel like explaining it...i can be very lyrical if i wanted to be very lyrical
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Old 02-28-05, 07:08 PM   #7
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^^^my nigga rell who go me into rappin...anyway...
aight fam...flow was on pont...nice scheme...words were simple but lyrics were good...some good lines in there...dont need a whole bunch of complex words in ya joint...delivery was good...the chorus is nice that shit is catchy...niggaz sleepin on ya fam but they dont know yet...they dont want it
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