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Voted For: Cincanatus

Aight check it......

Mad Dog-
Ya exert ya stress in the wrong direction,
This' so little a challenge...his name i won't mention,
Whats the matter? have i ruined ya complection?
U lookin red wit envy or is it from all these questions?,
^^^nice word play-but ya gotta work on those punches

1 suggestion...take ya 50% record out my face,
U got a 1/2 ass chance so ya lyrics i wouldn't waste,
Slap you back in place bitch you so disgraced,
You changed ya name so much, you don't even know ya face!,
^^^you used face Twice......Bad idea....and a weak punch

Don't mean to offend ya but this will hurt ya cranium,
You can't get a crowd on they feet in an all standin stadium,
^^^didnt make sence.....theres no such thing as a all standin stadium....work on that.........but ill give you points for origionality.........oh and by the way for people wit bad eye sight .......it doesnt help that you made it small and not to mention blue.....

ok

Cin-

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Opener
"Mad Bitch" Coz I Threw Him Off His Bike, And Ripped "Off His Chain"
Now He Aint Going No Where, Like School Kids In A Deans Office Mayn
^^^ok first off we know what a opner and a closer is ya dont need to spell it out....

Middle
You Still In The Stage Imagining You'll Beat Me Like Disney Shows.....
He's Mad Coz, Being A Mod, Doesn't Mean He Can Get Some Votes....
I'm No "Vet" But I Know Dogs Can't Rap And That's An Established Fact
Your Internet Connection Is For Girls, That's The Only Way He Interacts
Kid's From England But We Can't Understand Him, Like He Speaks Spanish
You Was Done My Friend Way Before You Dared To Accept My Challenge
^^^^^great punches......oh and that multi didnt go unnoticed........

Closer
Will The Rest Of Rap Verse Ever Know, You Pm For Votes? Or Is It Just A Mystery?
Man Fucka Waisting A Good Closer On An Dog, Like E Looch You Anceint History
^^^^^aaight punch but still better than what Mad Brought to the battle....

aight heres the bottom line.....
Mad.....you lacked alot of things.....but dont get me wrong.....nice verse.....i can see you elevating quick.....keep it up....

Cin-you won this battle but it was a close one.......keep on practin those punches......good word play.......but the thing you lack the most was personals....study up on those you gonna need it as you elevate.......

So my vote goes to Cin


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Voted For: Mad Dog

Cincanatus:

Opener
"Mad Bitch" Coz I Threw Him Off His Bike, And Ripped "Off His Chain"
Now He Aint Going No Where, Like School Kids In A Deans Office Mayn
Weak opener...
Middle
You Still In The Stage Imagining You'll Beat Me Like Disney Shows.....
He's Mad Coz, Being A Mod, Doesn't Mean He Can Get Some Votes....
Didnt make sense...
I'm No "Vet" But I Know Dogs Can't Rap And That's An Established Fact
Your Internet Connection Is For Girls, That's The Only Way He Interacts
dope...
Kid's From England But We Can't Understand Him, Like He Speaks Spanish
You Was Done My Friend Way Before You Dared To Accept My Challenge
Not much of a punch...
Closer
Will The Rest Of Rap Verse Ever Know, You Pm For Votes? Or Is It Just A Mystery?
Man Fucka Waisting A Good Closer On An Dog, Like E Looch You Anceint History
Not a punch...

Mad Dog:

Ya exert ya stress in the wrong direction,
This' so little a challenge...his name i won't mention,
ok opener...
Whats the matter? have i ruined ya complection?
U lookin red wit envy or is it from all these questions?,
not bad...
1 suggestion...take ya 50% record out my face,
U got a 1/2 ass chance so ya lyrics i wouldn't waste,
hard punch...
Slap you back in place bitch you so disgraced,
You changed ya name so much, you don't even know ya face!,
Good stuff...
Don't mean to offend ya but this will hurt ya cranium,
You can't get a crowd on they feet in an all standin stadium,
Damn hard closer!!!

I can honestly say that Mad Dog took this one easily and Im sure the votes will show. He had dope vocab, flow and nice use of multies and metaphors. Cincanatus, you need to do a little elevating. Try using harder punches and more personals next time. Also, fix your structure. I wasnt feeling the "opener, middle, closer" divisions of your verse. I envy you for battling vets, and think you have the skills to beat them...you just gotta try harder next time.

V/Mad Dog...................

Voted For: Cincanatus

Ya exert ya stress in the wrong direction,
This' so little a challenge...his name i won't mention,
Whats the matter? have i ruined ya complection?
U lookin red wit envy or is it from all these questions?,
This whole part could use work. 10/20


1 suggestion...take ya 50% record out my face,
U got a 1/2 ass chance so ya lyrics i wouldn't waste,
Slap you back in place bitch you so disgraced,
You changed ya name so much, you don't even know ya face!,
You need to work on some of your lines but some were there. 12/20


Don't mean to offend ya but this will hurt ya cranium,
You can't get a crowd on they feet in an all standin stadium,
Wasn't feeling the closer. I saw it coming out differently. 6/10

Mad Dog
Honestly I thought you could have came way better. I mean I saw your shit and I was amazed but you didn't come hard and the main rule in a battle. Come at him with all you got. I sound like jedi or some shit.
Over all 28



"Mad Bitch" Coz I Threw Him Off His Bike, And Ripped "Off His Chain"
Now He Aint Going No Where, Like School Kids In A Deans Office Mayn
I say it was good....9/10

You Still In The Stage Imagining You'll Beat Me Like Disney Shows.....
He's Mad Coz, Being A Mod, Doesn't Mean He Can Get Some Votes....
I wasn't feeling this line. 6/10

I'm No "Vet" But I Know Dogs Can't Rap And That's An Established Fact
Your Internet Connection Is For Girls, That's The Only Way He Interacts
hmmm I liked this. Had some humor to it. 10/10

Kid's From England But We Can't Understand Him, Like He Speaks Spanish
You Was Done My Friend Way Before You Dared To Accept My Challenge
Wasn't feeling this line at all. 4/10

Will The Rest Of Rap Verse Ever Know, You Pm For Votes? Or Is It Just A Mystery?
Man Fucka Waisting A Good Closer On An Dog, Like E Looch You Anceint History
Old and I don't like it. 4/10

Cincanatus
I liked some of the parts of your verse and i didn't like some othe parts. I liked alot of your lines. Alot of creativity and I like that. Keep it up. You'll go far with shit like this.




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OK i'mma say it like this....

Cin-Ok......you had a nice drop......was feeling ya multies and punches and ya disses towars him..i loved that right there....was really feeling that drop.VERY NICE

Mad-Ok.....i mean i've seen bette from you......Cin ripped in you in some things and u gott him inna few......i just felt that Cin had this battle on the lock.........you gotta bring ya complexity harda.....

v/Cin

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Punches-CIn had this easy....some of those lines are histarical......i mean i was saying Oh to some of those lines.......So This goes to CIn

Personals-Cin gets it easy because he dissed um with some sick lines.........i was liking the Spanish line and a few others......really tight man....So this gots to go to CIn

Flow-Goest to mad his wasn't as stretched and a little easier to read.......so this goes to Mad Dog

Structure-Mad dog again gets it.his lines weren't stretched and it looked pretty good.....

Overall-Cin got it...he just got the main parts of the battle which is punches vocab,,personals and thats what got it...if it was a battle on structure and flow you woulda got it Mad.....

V/Cin

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Voted For: Mad Dog

Cin:
"Mad Bitch" Coz I Threw Him Off His Bike, And Ripped "Off His Chain"
Now He Aint Going No Where, Like School Kids In A Deans Office Mayn
no!
You Still In The Stage Imagining You'll Beat Me Like Disney Shows.....
He's Mad Coz, Being A Mod, Doesn't Mean He Can Get Some Votes....
wack
I'm No "Vet" But I Know Dogs Can't Rap And That's An Established Fact
Your Internet Connection Is For Girls, That's The Only Way He Interacts
wack
Kid's From England But We Can't Understand Him, Like He Speaks Spanish
You Was Done My Friend Way Before You Dared To Accept My Challenge
this was self glorification
Will The Rest Of Rap Verse Ever Know, You Pm For Votes? Or Is It Just A Mystery?
Man Fucka Waisting A Good Closer On An Dog, Like E Looch You Anceint History
setup was lookin good(is that true?) then the punch was wack

This was a "meh" verse. Not enough of the hard shit. Too many comparisons. You've gotta be a little more direct to win battle's.

Mad Dog:
Ya exert ya stress in the wrong direction,
This' so little a challenge...his name i won't mention,
lmao... wording was bad man
Whats the matter? have i ruined ya complection?
U lookin red wit envy or is it from all these questions?,
nah
1 suggestion...take ya 50% record out my face,
U got a 1/2 ass chance so ya lyrics i wouldn't waste,
no
Slap you back in place bitch you so disgraced,
You changed ya name so much, you don't even know ya face!,
decent personal, i suppose =/
Don't mean to offend ya but this will hurt ya cranium,
You can't get a crowd on they feet in an all standin stadium,
no..

This was also a meh verse. Not really what i excpected from you. Hopefully you'll improve once you got back into the swing of things. Basically the only decent line in this battle was the name change thing. and that one it for mad dog.

Voted For: Cincanatus

k.....this is how i see it...close battle right here

Mad Dog...thought you had a nice verse and all, but what didnt get my vote was your punches seemed a little weak, not really anything that jumped out, had good flow/structure, but your wordplay wasn't that great, and the punches were too plain and simple.....had a good personal, bought his alias' an that, but overall, i didnt think you came as hard....no hate

Cincanatus.........this was tight, only reason i thought you should get this, was your punches, i felt, hit a little harder, you were tied in everyother category, but your attack seemed more focused, stayed consistent, and added more effectiveness to your punches, but this was a close battle, props to both people, hard one to decide..

v/cincanatus

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Normal Punches-Cincanatus, ok punches overall. Not the greatest punches, but overall I think you material was better than Mad Dog's. Mad Dog, a lot of self glorification lines and that is what killed your punches.

Personal Punches- Mad Dog, I saw a couple of personals, and your material was better than Cincanatus'. Cincanatus, no personals really. You had some wordplay, but that's it.

Metaphors-Cincanatus, your metaphors were ok, but not that strong or original metaphors. Mad Dog, your metaphors were rather boring and not that great. Stadium line was the best line, but that isn't saying much.

Multiple Rhymes-Mad Dog, you had them, and they were pretty good too. Cincanatus, no real multis, work on putting them in.

Structure-Tie, both had pretty good structure.

Flow-Mad Dog, I felt I could follow your flow a bit better than Cincantus'. Your simplicity kept it flowing. Cincanatus, not bad flow, just not as fluid as Mad Dog's.

Word Play-Cincanatus, you had some wordplay, and it wasn't too bad, but not completely original. Work on more original wordplay. Mad Dog, I didn't notice much wordplay in your verse. Try including some.

Cincanatus, I think you win this based on punches and having some wordplay. Your verse was more complex, but you need to work on personals and working in multis.

Mad Dog, I think being away from text so long hurt you. A lot of self glorification and fake personals hurt you. Not a lot of wordplay either. Work on punches and personals.

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v/Cincanatus

One Vote. One Battle. One Victory

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

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