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03-04-05, 10:18 PM
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[rate]~If I Could~[hot]
IP: 0825 899A
Just something quick on what I think shit should be like...Nothing special
If I could, take back time, I'd take what's mine The crown of hip-hop, matter-a-fact, I'd take the throne Change the globe, be known for the greatest rhymes And change the minds, of those who wanna hate the flow If I could bring back lives, it would be the soldiers of the past Like, Tupac Shakur, or Notorious BIG Get rid of all these troubles, and these boulders on our backs And make all the world's, boys and girls, glorify this If I could, change the Earth, I'd change the curse Why when a mother gives birth, the father walks out and leaves? Why we judge books by their cover? Have sex without rubbers? And when we depressed, we don't talk, we just spark up them trees If I could, change the streets, I would take away the beef Why everytime we try to show a little love, we fail? Why is there no money for education, but there's money for wars? The government's the criminal, so why are they putting us in jail? |
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03-04-05, 10:23 PM
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WESTCOAST
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IP: 28AD 5545
damn, dis as pretty good
6.5/10 i was feelin it hit up ma open mic http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=180172 |
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03-04-05, 10:48 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 0825 899A
weerd...thanx man...like I said, nothing too special...I will hit your shit up...Upping for more feed...1
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03-05-05, 11:26 AM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 3240 794D
up..................
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03-05-05, 10:31 PM
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Lyrics + Crunk = GHOSTE
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IP: DB1C DCA9
Upping this shit for Black~Magik...
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03-06-05, 02:45 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 0825 899A
leave some fuckin feed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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03-06-05, 02:47 PM
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IP: 258C A279
^thought u said you was retired...
...from this site
__________________
..The Council..
7 Day Theory |
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03-14-05, 09:42 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
this piece was good fam u really r sumthin' 2 look out 4 & yeah overall was 8.5/10 vocab was on point...structure was there...meta's were good...multis were nice...the only thang u need 2 work on is ur structure but othawise ur good fo sho
make sure 2 return the favor in this thread: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180699 |
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