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I M Bak
IP: 7D0E 8BD4
Oi Im Bak
Straight Out Out Of South Southland Boi Coming Want Beef Or Sumting Stop Fronting Leave U Laying With The Plants Muterfuker U Bak Chating Agin Only L;ast Week I Merked Your Friend Strreet Loyal I M From South Land Soil Dont Take South For A Fool Cause Im Slewing U I Jus Go Straight Though U U Acting Like Im New To The Game Blood I Put The Frame To Nthe Game Every Since I M Come Along The Game Changed People Say Names Get Meked And Have There Face Put In A Picture Frame Spme 1 Tell Me How To Put A Lionk On This
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IP: A3EA 639E
this was not really a good piece u need serious elevation but u can get betta not hating just sum friendly advice...structure was off...voacb needs elevation...work on ur wordplay...& keep writing & eventually u'll get 2 ur potential fo sho it was 5/10
make sure 2 return the favor in my battle: both lyrics were weak but i thought mine was betta http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180963 |
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