Can i get some input on this, camon fellas school me.

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dfunk

Voted For: Murdz

…dfunk, ya not a challenge I put ya in a sauna juss to make ya Rhymez Sweat…
…Cuz ya juss a thing of the Past and you haven’t even Reached ya Prime Yet…
decent
…Faggot im in your area you should watch your back and guard ya life…
…Cuz you must live in a ghetto the way your structure's far from nice…
weak punch
…And basically dog like pubs durin prohibition you're a waste of a bar…
…Cuz your punches never connected so why should I break em apart…
wack punch
…You figured Murdz would lose? That further proves ya brain is rattled…
…Cuz you'll only be up in votes when posting to raise the battle…
decent punch

overall Murdz took this one, punches were harder and the structure was in place

dfunk u need some elevation-help, cuz ur punches were weak & hardly any of them

made any sense though, both of u elevate, no hate…

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Voted For: Murdz

Aii Time To Vote and my Favor Better be Returned or I will get My vote DQed myself

aii first is

Murdz

dfunk, ya not a challenge I put ya in a sauna juss to make ya Rhymez Sweat…
…Cuz ya juss a thing of the Past and you haven’t even Reached ya Prime Yet…
....Not a very Good Opener
…Faggot im in your area you should watch your back and guard ya life…
…Cuz you must live in a ghetto the way your structure's far from nice…
.....Alright Nuttin Special...
…And basically dog like pubs durin prohibition you're a waste of a bar…
…Cuz your punches never connected so why should I break em apart…
.....Nice......
…You figured Murdz would lose? That further proves ya brain is rattled…
…Cuz you'll only be up in votes when posting to raise the battle…
........Nope.......

aii

Dfunk

This nigga Murdz one of them online nerds /
RV be his domain, on the net he looks for men tryin' to get laid /
..........Nope........
A fuckin' closet faggot /
Boy George and Elton John magnet /
.........No Punch.........
He a little rat with a human head that's designed to snitch / Fuckin faggot postin' gay shit on RV is your habit /
.................Nope.............
Betta drop that or get pierced with a rusty hatchet /
Can't fuck with none of my shit stupid, yet alone match it /
Can You Battle and Stop Fussing Please
I'll make a gay midget fuck the shit out of you G /
And let your whole family watch it and see /
......Nope......

Overall: Overall Murdz Didnt Come with the best verse ive seen but it was aii While on the other hand Dfunk didnt attemp a single punch his structure was ...BLAH!!.. and he really didnt attempt to make any strong contact with anything that would help him get a vote .....Murdz....You atleast attempted some punchez but they werent all that so dont think that ...... I Think That you both need to elevate No Hate Its jus that you both got some serious potential and all you need is more talent to go with it

RTF In A Less Than a day or i will get my vote Dq'ed PERSONALLY

Appreciate the input, will try to elevate. Thanks.

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dfunk

Yeah Mayne Now Can YoU RTF In my Sig

Thanx mayne it would really be apppreciated

COMEON HIT THIS SHIT UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPpppppp

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Voted For: Murdz

murdz
…dfunk, ya not a challenge I put ya in a sauna juss to make ya Rhymez Sweat…
…Cuz ya juss a thing of the Past and you haven’t even Reached ya Prime Yet…
…Faggot im in your area you should watch your back and guard ya life…
…Cuz you must live in a ghetto the way your structure's far from nice…
…And basically dog like pubs durin prohibition you're a waste of a bar…
…Cuz your punches never connected so why should I break em apart…
…You figured Murdz would lose? That further proves ya brain is rattled…
…Cuz you'll only be up in votes when posting to raise the battle…

nice punchlines
good structure
i liked ur disses at opponent
pretty good elevation
nice closure
overal verse was pretty nice
8/10

dfunk
This nigga Murdz one of them online nerds /
RV be his domain, on the net he looks for men tryin' to get laid /
A fuckin' closet faggot /
Boy George and Elton John magnet /
He a little rat with a human head that's designed to snitch / Fuckin faggot postin' gay shit on RV is your habit /
Betta drop that or get pierced with a rusty hatchet /
Can't fuck with none of my shit stupid, yet alone match it /
I'll make a gay midget fuck the shit out of you G /
And let your whole family watch it and see /

pretty weak verse
elton john line was gay
not dat many good punches
only a few punches and sum aint even land
work on elevatin more
use better lyrics
expand vocab
6/10
no hate
my v/murdz

ay yall cud u plz check out my battle vs. thekid523 and showtime
bof doez battles need votes and no1 iz votn so plz holla back wit a vote and feedback 4 da betta battler
holla back
RTF yall!

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upppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnn oneeeeee more voteeeeeee...

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umm murdsz is officailly hella dope, LOL

but umm you win becuase you are dope, LOL this is not d/r of anytype but tis real clear that murdz ownd dfunk,. good battle but dfunk you need to elavte alot more, after you loose 10 times then you shoudl make another name then atleast you will be done elavating and you can start fresgh

but murdz wins this becuase his whole verse was all around better

RTF on any battle in my sig

i dont have enough post to vote so heres feedback

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thanks fammm... upppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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