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Check in by: 04-11-05 at 03:00 PM

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Effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 02:35 PM.

K.SoLo has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 02:50 PM.

yo im spittin against a handy cap that can't even rap
i don't wanna just defeat ya i wanna murder u wid gats
my shit crushes the shit out of you ya like feathers
i'll rip into you bitch and you'll have 2 tape urself together
stupid mutha fucker your dad should have worn a rubber
nobody knew u'd be gay ur like jim carry out of dumb n dumber
girls run away from ur ass your skills are just straight trash
think you can whoop my ass when urs is gettin a thrash
he an't even got cash just a poor boy whos going no where
solo if you died not even a single person would even care
I give you scars your bars are gettin knocked back hard
anybody would think ya retard i'll give ya mind stars
as i smash into ya and landing you all the way in mars
i'll reach into ya and leave ya soul dead and demolished
bitch go to college your rhymes need to be more polished
I'll cremate your ass you know you can't hold my weight
straight up my skill will leave u killed and have u ass raped
fuckin faggot I seem to always attract these gay rappers
but later get embaressed when i make em fools afterwoulds

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Voted For: K.SoLo

v/ k. solo

effect, you didn't have any vocab, your punches were wack as hell, played out, atleast you had multi's but they were with weak vocab.. and your personals, the concept of someone being gay = played and u used in in like 5 of ur bars

k. solo, you had a good verse, not the best, your punches hit and personals were decent, i liked the fact u used alota metaphors and your punches and personals were played out. not the best vocab but it was decent

return the favor please.. links in the sig

v/ k. solo

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Voted For: K.SoLo

[center] K.Solo

Opener was alright..good wordplay and meta...the punch was decent...your verse was decent overall. structure was real good... and good flow. it was all on point. a few self glorification lines and fillers. but the rest was hot. i didnt see many personals. multi's i saw some here and there. vocab was aiight. you worded shit koo. but the set up should of been better. overall this verse was pretty nice 7/10

Effect

Toooo basic. i see you havent elevated. your shits still basic. your punches werent hard at all. but you had good structure and decent flow. personals. No. punches were horrible "murder you with gats" and you honestly consider that a hard line? shame...shame it is....multi's...none.....meta's...blah...similes.. .none....overall this verse was horrid 4/10

vote K.Solo

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you hating bitch.... konflicts why don't you kiss someone elses ass just cause i voted on 1 of ur battles you wanna hate vote fuck you. man

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how is that a hate vote..................stop bitchin cuz u gettin whored!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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KING SOLO.
I Built Up My Wack Immunity..That’s Why Ure Lines Got No Effect…
No Stallin I’ll Get To Da Point..Why Battle U Aint Getting No Respect…
^^GUD SETUP LINE..NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH
Never Say Anything Worthwhile..Ain’t Gonna Be A Link-In This Park…
Deliver Shots To Cut Ya..Solo Smellin Blood Like Great White Sharks…
^^META...BUT NO PUNCH HERE
Bitch Even Failed At Suckin..Put To Tha Gutter Like Poor-Paid-Hoes…
This An RV Battle..And Yet U Singin & Dancin Like Broadway-Shows…
^^GUD WORDPLAY...KINDA WEAK PUNCH
Solo Self-Glorifies..I Got Lyrics Flowin Like Blood From A Broken Nose…
Feelin Like Ludacris..Keep Facin Too Many Rookies, Not Enough Pros…
^^^DECENT
PM’ed Me For 16 Lines..Must Have Ya Solo Pre-Writ Script Done…
But U Ain’t Getting A Win..Just Like Sex Never Comes For A Nun…
^^^DECENT AGAIN
Effect Mistaken For Havin Fleas..U Constantly Scratchin Like DJ’s…
This Ho The Lyrical Dick Sucker..PM’s Vets And Starts Offerin BJ’s…
^^^NAH...THIS KINDA CONCEPTS PLAYED
Dawg U Lose..U Can’t Take This HeavyWeight Like Fat Bitches Legs…
I Crack Shit And Then Splatter Shit..Beatin U Easy Like Breakin Eggs…
^^^WORDPLAY NICE...AGAIN PUNCH LACKING
Like The Bombin Of Pearl Harbour..This Battle Will Live In Infamy…
Effect Brought His Pre-Writ..And Still FailedTo Bring A Diss-To-Me…
^^^OK.CLOSER

OVERALL, SUM NICE METAS & WORDPLAY WAS NICE TOO.GUD STRUCTURE, NICE FLOW.PUNCHES WERNT THAT HOT, COUPLE PLAYED CONCEPTS...SEEN A LOT BETA FROM U..BUT U DID ENOUGH TO TAKE THIS EASY.


EFFECT
yo im spittin against a handy cap that can't even rap
i don't wanna just defeat ya i wanna murder u wid gats
^^NO PUNCH...GUN LINES ARE MORE PLAYED THAN CARD GAMES
my shit crushes the shit out of you ya like feathers
i'll rip into you bitch and you'll have 2 tape urself together
^^BLAH...WEAK PUNCH, ...
stupid mutha fucker your dad should have worn a rubber
nobody knew u'd be gay ur like jim carry out of dumb n dumber
^^^WEAK....NO PUNCH HERE
girls run away from ur ass your skills are just straight trash
think you can whoop my ass when urs is gettin a thrash
^^^KINDA FUNNY..BUT ONLY DUE TO ITS WACKNESS.LOL
he an't even got cash just a poor boy whos going no where
solo if you died not even a single person would even care
^^BIT BETA...NOT GREAT
I give you scars your bars are gettin knocked back hard
anybody would think ya retard i'll give ya mind stars
^^BASIC, BASIC..
as i smash into ya and landing you all the way in mars
^^^REST OF BAR?
i'll reach into ya and leave ya soul dead and demolished
bitch go to college your rhymes need to be more polished
^^DINDT MAKE SENSE..OK IDEA BUT U RUINED IT..
I'll cremate your ass you know you can't hold my weight
straight up my skill will leave u killed and have u ass raped
^^AGAIN BLAH
fuckin faggot I seem to always attract these gay rappers
but later get embaressed when i make em fools afterwoulds
^^NO....WEAK

OVERALL- CONCEPTS TOO SIMPLE, U NEED WORDPLAY & PUNCHES, SUM OF YA LINES DFNT MAKE SENSE, NO PERSONALS,
STRUC & FLOW O.K...THATS ABOUT IT


PLEASE RETURN ONE....

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Appologies...i Dnt Got The Posts..................

Hit Up The Battle In The Link I Left, Ill Return On Ya Other Battles.
Peace

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Voted For: K.SoLo

Better personals and punches. When you talk about gats and you vast range of weaponery, it's automatically demotes your verse. Must more quotables from Solo's verse as well, and had a few personals in there which made the verse that much more interesting.

Decent battle.