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6-8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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Goodluck Dawg.....~1~

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-18-05 at 05:15 PM

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K!ng-Y@Yo has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-18-05 04:46 PM.

iLL Cee has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-18-05 04:48 PM.

Still tryin to get back in my groove but it dont look like its happening right now dis shits wack as hell.......

(Verse)
Im tellin u dawg ur way of ur league iLL Cee,
Hes all ova these vets dick like Monic and Bill C
I think u need to go back where u came from,
Cuzz u choke up so much im thinkin u to dumb
Using a lot slang lets see if ur fast enough to hang,
Dont think u can cuzz smoking herbs is my thang
In dis battle dawg ur herb ass cant see me,
Look in front of u and nothin is wut u st-ill Cee


HAHA i know u can do betta then dis.....~1~

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Young-Prophecy

Secret Society

Reppin one of tha best graphic heads in RV......Lyricalflowz

Well here we go.

So unoriginal its sad when u steal ur name from G-Unit..
He had a undefeated record but battling me he Blew-It..
"Liven" in the Life of a Convict No chance Escapen Me..
Some "Legend" not even enough respect to get a Collab-See..
Wishen me Luck but a Leprichan Couldnt Save-You..
As My punches beat u down my Flow Enslaves-You..
Your Chances were Slim to non biten off more then u can chew..
Cause you KNOW ur bad when u get dissed by ur own Crew..

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Well here we go..

So unoriginal its sad when u steal ur name from G-Unit..
He had a undefeated record but battling me he Blew-It..
"Liven" in the Life of a Convict No chance Escapen Me..
Some "Legend" not even enough respect to get a Collab-See..
Wishen me Luck but a Leprichan Couldnt Save-You..
As My punches beat u down my Flow Enslaves-You..
Your Chances were Slim to non biten off more then u can chew..
Cause you KNOW ur bad when u get dissed by ur own Crew..

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damn i posted it twice agian =\,My fault but i dont think they can see the other.

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^^^Its all good homie......lol....my opinion u beat me...~1~ UPPIN FOR VOTES

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Young-Prophecy

Secret Society

Reppin one of tha best graphic heads in RV......Lyricalflowz

Voted For: iLL Cee

lmao it was sad reading king yayo's verse, king, those punches were the most played out shit every, ill cee you had some nice personals and punches, good similies like the leprachaun and persons like gettin dissed by his own crew and collab, if you tapped multis into your verse it would be doper, but pathetic king yayo, lmao. v/ ill cee, RTF FEEDBACK ON OM'S.

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Thorn.

Don't get pricked.

Voted For: iLL Cee

ill Cee- Last two lines were good, more complexity on your end than Yayo's spit. Punches were one-sided in your favor.

King Yayo- Bill C line is so played, it kind of made me sour on the rest of your spit....even so there really wasn't many standout verses..

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i already voted so this im jus checkin polls,...................

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Voted For: iLL Cee

O~K~K~K

This is what I Think

Ill C
So unoriginal its sad when u steal ur name from G-Unit..
He had a undefeated record but battling me he Blew-It..
.: Aii Opener made me Giggle LOL but not laugh :.
"Liven" in the Life of a Convict No chance Escapen Me..
Some "Legend" not even enough respect to get a Collab-See..
.: Nice Punch But you stession To make it ryme that time :.
Wishen me Luck but a Leprichan Couldnt Save-You..
As My punches beat u down my Flow Enslaves-You..
.: Nuttin specail :.[b]
Your Chances were Slim to non biten off more then u can chew..
Cause you KNOW ur bad when u get dissed by ur own Crew..
[b].: OMFG !! That Was Jus Oh mayne NICE!!! :.
OVERALL:

aii based on your verse you hade somoe very good bars one or two i didnt like but they were aii so outta your 4 bars
I liked 3/4 so Id give your verse a Rating of 75% which Is good considering you only did 4 bars NICE VERSE Mayne especially the Ending

King Y@Yo
Im tellin u dawg ur way of ur league iLL Cee,
Hes all ova these vets dick like Monic and Bill C
come on mayne you know that wasnt good
I think u need to go back where u came from,
Cuzz u choke up so much im thinkin u to dumb
No Mayne ......
Using a lot slang lets see if ur fast enough to hang,
Dont think u can cuzz smoking herbs is my thang
come on man .... You know you Aint gettin this
In dis battle dawg ur herb ass cant see me,
Look in front of u and nothin is wut u st-ill Cee
Better but Still

OVERALL:
You jus know you didnt win rii?..... So im not gonna explain myself but i do have some advice go and try to elevate a little in the Cyphers and Freestyle a little but every here and there and you will get your talent back (I hope)

Good luck in the future

[u]RTF in N e one of the battles in my sig PLEASE!!!! [u]

Voted For: iLL Cee

LMFAO you merked him fam....your shit was aiight....your flow was good....structure was good...that gave you a big edge....and the fact that you had personals...your punches was blah.....alot of fillers.........your vocab was good...you lacked wordplay though....overall this was a pretty dope verse.... 6.5/10

king: blah...your shit was aiight aswell...your punches lacked and your flow was koo.....your structure was ok but you lacked personals....thats what costed you this battle...overall 5/10

viote: ill Cee

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