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Do You See What I See?
IP: EF48 5B3C
I did this piece for a project at my school n obviously the topic wuz...
Do You See What I See? I see... black kids jealous of one another Then the next day have the audacity to act like brothers I see... white kids taking care of business cuz they know The fruits of their labor will later on show I see... Mexicans commin ova and takin everyone's job They work hard for their keep and you never see them sob I see... stressin ova livin up to our parents' dreams They have us on the highest pedistal or so it seems I see... single mothers workin day and night Dead beat dads that took that flight OUtta the house and away from the kids and wife Then wonda why the kids don't want him in their life I see... hangin out on the streets Drinkin, smokin, and sellin weed I see... complaints ova everything commin from everyone And the way they solve their problems is by pickin up a gun I see... people capable of living a betta way Yet they make the choice not to betta themselves each and every day I see... young people with so much talent and skill But they hang with the wrong crowd and their fate is eternally sealed So... do you see what I see? lemme kno wut yall think...uppin fa feedback |
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yeah i like it.....rhyme scheme changes a bit throughout....but, maybe u meant that!? nice 1! ~#1#~
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