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Old 05-03-05, 09:21 PM   #1
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This is really a spoken word type poem, but it reads o.k.


Love Me

I don’t wanna have sex, that’s just so passé
I must say I’d rather lay up and make love all day
U see…sex is an impulse action executed for ya satisfaction
With only a fraction of the feelings u exert when making love

I want you to Love Me

See…I wanna make love to you in a way you couldn’t handle
On a bed of rose petals surrounded by scented candles
Massage oils on ya back so I can rub you the right way
One hand over ya mouth, cuz there’s no telling what you might say

I want you to Love Me
You utter faint screams of pleasure as I penetrate ya walls
Missionary no dog at this time
Just a pelvic grind, push and thrust…a must, when we make love
Because…your sexy smile excites my libido…causes me to go
Crazy…dazing as I think about the climatic peaks we’ve experienced
I’m taken to a wonderful place of bliss and ecstasy
With you next to me…exciting my mind, body and soul
Arousing me until I lose control
Flashbacks of muffled moans entice my coclea
Givin me eargasms as I give you orgasms, back spasms
Causin your body to erupt with passion and scream….......Love Me
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Old 05-03-05, 09:27 PM   #2
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omg. This is wierd. Stupid topic but the good thing is that you explained very well. good job.
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Old 05-04-05, 11:49 AM   #3
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Uhhh...thanx....uppin 4 feed
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Old 05-04-05, 02:01 PM   #4
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this was decent....interesting topic....explained well but try pickin another topic besides sex lol....it'll catch readers interest more....but overall this was some good shit
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Old 05-04-05, 08:19 PM   #5
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Preciate tha feed, I'll try and write about a broader topic next time
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Old 05-05-05, 06:35 PM   #6
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lol...this wuz uh....unique...like da otha guy said....u explained it well but do get anotha topic next time
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