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05-10-05, 11:22 PM
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Skadoosh!
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"I Wanna Be........."
IP: D1BF FA16
Yeah, I was bored and keyed up a quick OM for ya........ I wanna be a rap star so I can get money when my album goes platinum… I wanna be a pimp so I can line up hoez, powder my hand ‘n’ be slappin ‘em… I wanna be a fireman so I can ride in the fire truck and slide down poles… I wanna be a stripper so I can dance and get dollars put down my clothes… I wanna be a judge so I can bang hammers and send people straight to jail… I wanna be a retail worker so I can have that pleasure of making a sale… I wanna be a hacker so I can crack files and repair computer glitches… I wanna be a porn star so I can get paid money to constantly fuck bitches… I wanna be a movie star so I can be on the big screen ‘n’ have clans of fans… I wanna be a construction worker so I can help create buildings from plans… I wanna be a gambler so I can bet on shit and collect loads ‘n’ loads of cash… I wanna be a loan shark so I can take them non-payers and beat on their ass… I wanna be an alcoholic so I can spend all day throwing back those beers… I wanna be a comedian so I can crack jokes and have people laughing tears… I wanna be a casino owner so I can laugh as people lose all their money… I wanna be a clown so I can make a fool of myself cuz I think it wud be funny… I wanna be a race car driver so I can rip it in them super-charged cars… I wanna be an astronaut so I can jump in a shuttle and venture into the stars… I wanna be the president so I can live my life up in the White House… I wanna be a dentist so I can take tools and shove ‘em in ya mouth… I wanna be a gangsta so I can roll with guns and blast hoez who attack me… I wanna be a drug addict so I can feed my need for weed and crack G… I wanna be a social worker so I can help get better lives for abused kids… I wanna be an auctioneer so I can put up goods and have people make bids… I wanna be a murderer so I can cut people up and have myself a killing spree… But mostly I wanna be me and just see where life decides to take me… LINK: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190252
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05-10-05, 11:31 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
ye... you beat me on tha creativity.... the structure was good dawg..... vocab 9 of ten
and yo whole shit, Get it a 9 out of 10 too.. pc out homeboy
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05-11-05, 11:42 AM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: D1BF FA16
feed bitchez feed............................
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05-11-05, 11:59 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: 452E 0970
ye this was a 6/10 because your vocab didn´t show a lot that of sayin I wana be again and again gets to be a pain on the ass after readin 6 lines, but it wuz good after all
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05-11-05, 12:55 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: DAA3 1F21
werd, nice little drop here solo, a poetic feel to it
probably go good in poetic scriptures as well as here reminds me of jacks om "metaphorically speakin" . lol@ herbs givin a 6/10....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-12-05, 02:28 AM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: D1BF FA16
humpin the shit outta this bizzle bitch!!!!
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05-12-05, 05:08 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: A7AC EBEC
yo i liked this peace... nice structure and flow and shit.. mayne good work keep it up
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