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05-12-05, 04:30 AM
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My Son Richard...
IP: A7AC EBEC
I love Richard, my son is my pride and joy His cute little face, while he plays with his toys He says 'I love you Daddy' with excitement in his voice 'Vroom Vroom' with his little trucks he makes noise Only 3 years old, but he is my complete everything How many little rascals do I treat like a king? Bright blue eyes, freckles, he's my little man Twelve years old getting in trouble with his clan I love him sooo much, thats why I ground him Thinking how do I live with him, or without him? He stresses me out, but I still love him infinite Since the day I teared at his birth theres been no regret He's nineteen years old now and heading to college I'm so proud of how well he used up my wallet He took me into a seperate room so none knew Said "Dad I wouldn't be here if it weren't for you" A tear from his eye he said "Just saying thanks You gave me a lot even when little was in the banks" Hes very handsome, now thirty five years old Has a beautiful wife Jen that he treats like gold He's a fire fighter and he's saved many lives People crying with him saying "I owe you my life" His Daughter Aaron is now such a lucky girl So much smiles and love that brighten up her world So much memories in my heart are now recorded Then I stopped daydreaming realising he was aborted
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05-12-05, 05:09 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: A7AC EBEC
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2145658
feed left on...
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05-13-05, 01:51 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: A7AC EBEC
uppin this.......
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05-13-05, 02:11 AM
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Get Stomped.
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IP: C215 D80A
Ohhh Deep Shit Homie That Was Dopeness Good Flow Rymes Vocab Good Drop Fam
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05-13-05, 02:18 AM
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: A7AC EBEC
thanks man.. upping.. this
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05-13-05, 10:30 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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Deep shit. Needs more views. That's a bitch. But this shit is nice. Kinda poetry type. I was feeling it. 9/10
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05-13-05, 03:40 PM
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wuldnt all that...couldve gotten deaper with it...weak vocab if ur usin this type of writing...and u couldve made it longer...
5/10 stay up
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