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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
05-18-05, 09:51 PM
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I'm Supposed to Die Tonight (remix)
IP: B413 3CF4
I'm Supposed to Die Tonight (remix)
let me know what you notice i could do better http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2153139 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2153144 |
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05-18-05, 10:14 PM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: 3B27 2020
im sorry to hear about that yo.....
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05-19-05, 08:11 AM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 7F42 B9C4
eeee quality is wack,lyrics are wack too,no hate,you remind me of me before,lol the chorus,quality is too wack! but yo keep elevating
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05-19-05, 09:49 AM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 470F 4D27
^ you could've said that way nycer =\...mean ass!!...
never heard this beat before, it's madd low so I still haven't really heard it =\... but yeah, your quality's okay, it's not the worst I've ever heard, but yes, you should make your lyrics more complex...the hook was kewl, I like your singing on it, you were on key and everything...ya 2nd verse was better than the first...ya flow is pretty nyce though, you just gotta do better on ya lyrics, but that last bar was nyce though kyd, do s'more like that and you'll be fine...keep at it...
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05-21-05, 07:10 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: B31E 3028
yo man ur flow wuz a lil choppy but yo delivery wuz strate..........like L said u need to up ur lyrics.........aiite man
pz ~1~
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