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05-24-05, 02:38 AM
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Love Letter
IP: FFBA C081
To Whom it May Concern..... It seems its been forever since we last touched years and months since "I love u"Meant so much Been forever since i smelled your Sweet Fragerence U Drove Me Into Sexual Indevers Skipping Patience And Struggling to find the Time 2 Mentally Ballence My Actions from seeing u Cry then back 2 Laughin And Passout From Lovemakeing to Arise Confused and I say i'll Never Forget so please Come Proove That these Passions and Intensions are Honest Towards me Secureing your Heart 4ever i Promise That i will Never Let another Tear Drip from You Pussy Isnt a Factor..Love is what i want 4rm U So Please Explain Lord..Love..How can i 4get Her Only Can Take Steps Forward with this Luv Letter. Sincerely,, James
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05-24-05, 02:12 PM
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05-24-05, 07:42 PM
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nice. If I was older I would write shit like this. lol. Very nice flow. I just liked the whole thing cuz it was about love. Good job ....
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05-24-05, 07:43 PM
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thanx cuz......
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05-24-05, 08:28 PM
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nice love letter man, nothing really to say except your spelling is off again, but it was sweet and to the point, you should give this to the girl..lol, anyway keep dropping..1
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05-24-05, 08:39 PM
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IP: FFBA C081
thanks...........
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05-25-05, 01:41 AM
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Well, this was nice...I feel pices like this, cuz I normally write stuff like this all tha time...nice flow, good concept and just an overall nice piece.
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05-28-05, 08:17 PM
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IP: FFBA C081
4 sho thanks ........
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