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06-07-05, 03:19 PM
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this is Americanize junk and characterize as funk even a wise punk can read this//nee
IP: CF74 5D3A
this is Americanize junk and characterize as funk even a wise punk can read this//need bliss love or an exertion of power that'll tower like Babel with shower I'm able to smell good in this swell hood// best use right guard
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06-07-05, 03:49 PM
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IP: AFBD 2333
I think you need to work on structure, the vocab was nice, the lyrics were decent but the structure is just a little off
can you return the favor? http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194203 |
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