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R-Rated 5 100.00%
pictureperfect2 0 0%
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Old 06-12-05, 09:28 PM   #16
M&rk
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listen kid, just cuz u vote on every battle on here and ask for bias votes to be returned doesn't mean u the dope shit on this site... fuck outta here
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Old 06-13-05, 10:32 PM   #17
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Upping This Motherfucker

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Old 06-15-05, 02:29 PM   #18
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Upping This Motherfucking Piece of Shit Slept Ass Battle.

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Old 06-16-05, 12:40 PM   #19
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Uppin This Battle..Please Vote...Fucking Fucks.

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Old 06-16-05, 06:46 PM   #20
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get up there............... :throws battle to top:
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Old 06-17-05, 02:48 AM   #21
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Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

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Old 06-17-05, 07:46 PM   #22
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Voted For: R-Rated

I think R took this one close, because his punches were harder hitting, and wayy more interesting. this was a close battle, but it came down to one thing that R had better...his verse was more interesting, which made his punches hit harder. i think personals were pretty much the same in this one, but r had some wayy funnier and intelligent disses. his wordplay was on point. picture perfect came with coo rhymin, and nice flow to his verse and he had some coo disses, but like i said before, his verse was boring. r rated takes my vote. more interesting verse, which made everything hit harder for him.

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Old 06-18-05, 01:39 AM   #23
Kirk
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Voted For: R-Rated

This Aint A Metaphor When I Say Let Me Paint A Perfect Picture of You..
Take Some Newb, Brush Some Played, and Add Some Wack To The Mixture Too..
^Nice play off his name... second line was funny aswell
PicturePefect Who?! Kid Your Status On This Site Is Completly Irrelevant..
Your Shit Is More Recycled Than Green Paper Covered With Dead Presidents..
^Not as good as your first bar but was good, nice punch in the second line
I Could Number My Lines and PicturePerfect Still Couldn't Count-R-Punches..
Daum The Note-R-Back Full of Hints..and He Still Couldn't Back-N-Hunches..
^Nice shit right there, first line was dopeness and well as the second line.. nice punch hoe
Watch Restricted Force-Flow This Fag..Like Homophobics Drowning Gay Kids..
Shit This Bitch Can't Even Begin To See My Keyed Verse...Like Rays Hits..
^Pretty decent too.. Not your best in this verse though
He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo....
Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??..
^haha, dope bar right there... second like = funny as shit

Overall you were very consistent with your punches and there wasn't really any fillers within your verse, each line shitted on him which is always good... And you had some funny lines in there too... nice verse



Ya crews a laughing stock like if u gave corn a tickle or shake
but like silicon breasts in ya face u don’t even care that they fake
^Started out well but then the second line fucked it up... breast implant lines = gay as fuck
this kids asshole is loose fitted like my jeans and what a crime
R’s talent continues to plunge more than a plumber working over time
^Meh... nice punch but setup was shitty... first line i felt was forced out and just a filler
it aint a greeting but your hands will be shaking when we meeting
16 bucks for a cd… your not worth 7 like other R-rated screenings
^Like your other bars.. the first line is good but the second is wack... well it wasn't wack but not as good as R-Rated
your punches make my stomache hurt after reading your spit
but dont get excited that happens whenever i laugh at stupid shit
^meh... kinda wack... I guess decent but could have been set up alot better and worded better
you say u got a ‘horizon of thoughts’ but this shit still isn’t fair
cuz your mind needs more than a metaphor for your skills to compare
^Meh... not much of a punch...

Overall your verse was decent but punches and consistency didn't compare with R-Rated... and yours was rather boring... nothing made me want to continue reading it... but alright verse..

vote- R-Rated
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Old 06-18-05, 10:02 AM   #24
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Uppin This Motherfucker For Some Vizotes..

Bitches..

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Old 06-20-05, 12:07 PM   #25
Stanza
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Voted For: R-Rated

Aii Breakdown

Flow- Aii The flow has to go To PP2 But Only Bcuz His line were shorten and had less to say Than R Rated

Punchez DonT make me laught the punchez go To R-Rated He really Out did himself in this battle im still laughing from this bar
He's As Reliable As Cars With Gas Guages On E...He Quick To Stall Yo....
Cause His Ass Gets Lost In Lines Easliy...Like Books of Wheres Waldo??..

Only bcuz Last week I couldnt find waldo In the book LOL

personal-Although There was no really Good use of personals In This battle the only person who used personals was PP2 so id have to give it to him

Multies- None Used from Either of you
Vocab- It has to go to R-Rated LOL I Mean He didnt use any BIG WORDs but he used the right words in the right way so he gets that category

Originality- R-Rated .......Verse didnt have any played concepts or any Overused words or Wordplay so He takes Originality with ease


Overall i think That My vote has to go to R-Rated only Bcuz he Used His Wordplay in such a Magnificent way That i was like So He gets my vote in this battle

v/ R- Rated

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Old 06-21-05, 05:53 PM   #26
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Uppin This Battle.

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Old 06-22-05, 09:35 AM   #27
Dirty Nigga
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Voted For: R-Rated

R.....................

Nice verse, really camer hard with the name play, propps for that.,...punches hit they mark like you planned them too.

Waldo shit is played, but other then that, you're originality was down too a T, Nice verse, you killed pitcure with it....not much more i can say on your peice but Tight drop!


Pitcure..........

Verse was far too basic, wasnt feelin the closer in which you said was ill, nothin much came out of the personal you attempted, punches were basic, not very effective for real dog...

propps on the r-rated screening bar tho...it was decent, stood out, could of came alot harder, need too be more creativite an imaginative with the wordplay.......

Vote=R-Rated

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Peace out y'all, good job both.
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