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06-19-05, 10:02 PM | #16 | ||||
everytime i rhyme...
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more poetryish yes
but some nicely thought of rhymes....cool story within this lyrics were good flows ight overall i enjoyed the read...stay real
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06-20-05, 06:37 PM | #17 | ||||
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tnx yeaaaaaaaaa ma first 2 page post llol tnx
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06-21-05, 09:54 AM | #18 | ||||
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<= = = (--mor Uppinz--) = = =>
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06-21-05, 09:59 AM | #19 | ||||
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<= = = (--mor Uppinz--) = = =>
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06-22-05, 07:07 PM | #20 | |||
WhoAreYou?
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Yo this was hot for real. Its like it put us in the guys shoes giving us an insight into the person's train of thought.
And i was feeling the vocab in this piece.it was decent without getting to the point of tryna be a smartass or nothin. You got talent right there. keep it up. |
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06-22-05, 07:39 PM | #21 | |||||||
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yo that shyt was genius . keep it comen ma ......im looken forward to hearen from you
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06-24-05, 10:08 AM | #22 | ||||
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tnx...... truly appriciated ~1~
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07-01-05, 04:28 PM | #23 | ||||
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Read This ####.......... N Up Plz.............. Tnx
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07-01-05, 10:20 PM | #24 | ||||
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damn ma u wrote sum deep shit, good imagery, multi'z, & keep writing i like it
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07-10-05, 02:31 PM | #25 | ||||
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tnx yall.........for realll,,, truly appriciate it........ yall keep doin ur thing 2 ~1~
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