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"Trouble" - A fun little beat with a mandolin melody, hard kicks tight bass.
"Depression"- Emotional beat, heavy strings, heavy bass, and a harpish melody. Bells sound kinda fucked up at the hook though.
"The Deep End"- Kinda tough explaining this one...sorda a club banger, I guess...Hard kicks, rockish hook.

Feedback please!

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trouble= fucking annoying...take that bass or wateva or do something else with it cuz its annoying...the chorus gets worst...the melodi is iighht...nice drums tho

depression= mmm better than trouble...teres missing something...like better kicks or hithats ...dont put claps on that..put snares...make the tempo i lil bit faster cuz thats too fast...well its my opinion...take that thing off the chorus please...its anoying

The Deep End= better than the others...but i cant see someone rip that beat...nice snare i like them...the melodie is iight...make something more simple cuz it sounds like its the chorus all the way...the electric guitar is annoyin again...no hate

overall if u continu makin beats ull be dope...ur creative so holla at me when ull get more beats done

Deep End - Just looped over and over...got old after awhile, plus I heard a short pause where it souded like you looped it

Depression - kind of dry, missing something it seems, and I can hear a short pause where you loop over, need to work on mixing

Trouble - Annoying really....once again work on ya mixing a little....


you got skills, just keep practicing

they were all very annoin cuz u first started out wit an aight beat then u changed it to a diff. tempo diff. style man and kept on changin them almost everybeat but the only one that was good i think it was trouble the last one there that u had that kept a maintainin beat in the beginin and then added more styles inot them so keep that up aight man just an hones opinion aight man but keep doin ya thing

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