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06-26-05, 01:36 AM
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B.I.G.
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Don't Come Back
IP: 7D8B DD8E
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man... this bitch is anoying me..... I ain't gon give you mo money... please get outta here... (Bridge) Like Eminem says "bitches, they come they go" This bitch keeps comin back for more do' I guess I will never leave this Ho Cuz the bitch will always come back fo' mo' (Hook) "I want money" Nope "I Want Drugs" Nope "I'll Kill Myself" I Hope "I Want A Ride" Nope Get Out bitch... and Don't Come Back Girl you bouta give me a heart attack Leave now Girl... and Don't come back don't make me use this ma' fuckin gat (Verse 1) It was a good night under the city's light Wuz feelin full of might, a nice gurl at sight She came to me like we can do this tonight but I wasn't right, I should had left her on the green light but she had them hips swingin like DAMN!!!! This gurl tonight sho' needs a MAN she was kinda gracious, I couldn't fight temptations we were sho goin to make sum creations We had nice time in Bed, I've never seen an "ass Like That" but a couple days later I wuz feelin like "pass that gat" cuz she wuz usin all my money for her clothes I warn ya'll never trust this kinda hoes (Hook) "I want money" Nope "I Want Drugs" Nope "I'll Kill Myself" I Hope "I Want A Ride" Nope Get Out bitch... and Don't Come Back Girl you bouta give me a heart attack Leave now Girl... and Don't come back don't make me use this ma' fuckin gat (Verse 2) She brought me a problem every day of the week But I liked spankin that beautifull ass cheek She spent my money on pure non-sence shit But I loved when she put her mouth right on my dick The day came "meet-the-parents" I wuz like please no I had to "Live-with-titans" C'mon bitch lets go.... Her mother was ugly, Even Her dad called her pig I only liked "doggy", but to find my shoe "start to dig"* Comin back home I told her "this won't happen" "I have to go n start my career in rappin" she cried for a week and I tryed to chill her The next week I was just about ta kill her I ended up in court, for attempt of murder She looked at me like "You nigga crossed the border" That bitch won't leave me alone, she was "head strong" I guess now that I was wrong... come on ya'll sing along (Bridge) Like Eminem says "bitches, they come they go" This bitch keeps comin back for more do' I guess I will never leave this Ho Cuz the bitch will always come back fo' mo' (Hook) "I want money" Nope "I Want Drugs" Nope "I'll Kill Myself" I Hope "I Want A Ride" Nope Get Out bitch... and Don't Come Back Girl you bouta give me a heart attack Leave now Girl... and Don't come back don't make me use this ma' fuckin gat (Outro) **Judge Talkin** the defender is..... Inocent!!! **a lot of people talkin** **me talkin** Sorry bitch... you lost again **the bitch looks at me and leaves the court** hahahahaha..... and Don't come back **door closes** __________________________________________________ _______________ *doggy was the name of the dog and he burried my shoe
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 Bizzacckkk Last edited by Ax Dogg : 06-26-05 at 01:40 AM. |
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06-26-05, 04:39 AM
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Back....
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IP: 5B2F DC1D
it was good but could use some work. thats all....
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06-26-05, 01:51 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
thanxx.................... uppin..........................
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06-26-05, 09:10 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
........................uppin..................... .....................
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06-26-05, 09:17 PM
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IP: 775C 64E4
i will not read this...
pm me a copy with no hooks.... thx
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06-27-05, 12:06 AM
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B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
wtf?........... aight whateva......... LOL
................uppin this shit............................
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06-27-05, 02:47 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP: 7D8B DD8E
uppin............................................. ...
feedback plz
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06-27-05, 03:21 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: A0F2 0238
this was a wack concept from beginning to end
. be more original n not mainstream with ya om's dont mention eminem in ya shit n think it'll make people like what they read..... you need alot of elevation .. find ya style cuz as of right now it just looks like gibberish that ryhmes... no hate man, just being real...i wouldve never posted trash like this you need to up your standards of whats good n whats bad in ya opinion....seriously....go back to the drawing board n research what dope heads drop on this board n on others.....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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