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07-01-05, 05:14 PM
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dope
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keeping my distance
IP: BFFF 41EC
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I keep my distance from everyone music can make effect you and make you be gone it's like magic to express my crazy thoughts that bottle up inside so i let them out with force yo my mind is complex it effect, twisting emcees necks if any guy trys to disrespect your ass is gonna get messed my life is depressed i guess but give me credit for the stress people try testing me but you know i got skills and blessed rhymes fully equipped get your fake ass ripped and get flipped backwards all ya insults just slip get wipped for talking shit as i split your vocals anybody got the balls to step on me is gonna fall in battles i enter war zones, waiting till we battle alone and beat you so bad that you kick scream and moan i'll rip your insides out and string them up like curtains im only happy inside when I know your an emcee hurting talk is cheap bitch, don't think im'a ever leave cuz this game needs me i'll come back wid a trick up my sleeve bad ass, ill spitter, fucked your bitch to see if this dick'll fit her the rhyme shitter that'll leave ya half eaten and pit yer you've never heard of an emcee as fucking mad as me fuck wid me bitch and i'll leave ya bloody mess tragedy this was real quick but dope |
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07-01-05, 05:23 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP: DD02 1081
Elevate your vocab!
nice droppin'... tight flow n structure, multi's well played on sum lines... nice hook Overall - 7/10
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07-01-05, 06:39 PM
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dope
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IP: BFFF 41EC
yea thanks m8 but it diserves a bit more den a 7 i reckon but anyway...
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07-01-05, 08:55 PM
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dope
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IP: BFFF 41EC
yea for real this verse was dope wid multies and spitting straight off the top.....
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07-01-05, 11:39 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 3820 3E99
this was pretty good, flow and structure was good, vocab was ok, overall nice job, keep em comin
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 i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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