unlike a "cheverlete" u trying doge a "vet"(corvette)
before i fuck up you "hardware", i got a "lodge-a-text"//
to take out lames like u so now im a kidnapper
but u wouldnt be worth "50 cent" if u was a "penny raper"//
and if u want "computer" love then u came to the wrong "gate-way"
cause "stevie wonder" say u ugly thats bad when a "blind date" say//
maybe its a bad day... take some time to rest
but becoming a fake rapper is this con-quest//(con artist)
i give it to u your flows are "slik" cause they even "slipped" past u
so turn that how to rap book cause its past due//
take u out with a "shot in the arm" like a "lethal injection"
u remind me of "ben wallace" always gettin "rejections"//
with no recollection...that means you life is science fiction
but ur rhyme are on an upper floor in critical condition//

these are some of my lines i spit in my first battle they maybe weak im planning on progressing but im showing that i have potntial so u can holla at me

u kinda nice man.......

...i'll talk with R-Rated and see whats happenin.....

You are defently R.A.W material fams

Come to R.A.W and you will be gurranted a spot

I'd let you join RAW, But ya need a few battles first, but if ya intrested get a battle open, drop a verse i'll peep it an let you know what i think

but you definately got potential, i'm feelin it, man.

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a yo what do i have to do to holla at your crews or whatever

go in 2 da raw krew forum & drop 2 linkz &/or a keystyle ov no less than 6 lines


in da tryout thread in our raw krew forum mayn, can u do dat plz? u shuld be in da krew ur dope

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Yo MC.....

Got a new elevation crew called WAR

They'll be battle league, punchline comps, we'll hook up crew battles for y'all.....an you'll be affliated with RAW, If ya intrested let me know, man.

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