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07-24-05, 04:34 PM
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Business Not Personal
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Voted For: Drakel
Drakel... haha ya shit was funny man.... good personals, good hard punches. ya opener was just ok... lacked in a hard punch... good concept but just lacking a little bit. now your closer on the other hand was straight hotness.... excellent closer, funny as hell, hard punch... very good verse here ya best bar: now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career? Chalk Clorox... first of all your structure could use some help, if your structure is bad it ruins the flow to your verse. second of all, there was really no personals in your verse, it could of been used for anyone. the only personal in there was the 5000 posts. ya opener wasnt very good, you even dissed yourself in it.....?????? your closer was pretty good... the setup line could of been better. some of your lines were stretch compared to the other line in that bar ya best bar: i gatta come sick,or this fight will get worse, i know if i come whack every one will think i was bitin your verse
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07-24-05, 05:30 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
lmlo at getting tips from a 2-7 dude.....saying that bar doesn't rhyme, haha
oh well, good lookin.....http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/5/bump.gif
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07-25-05, 12:39 AM
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
bump..............................................
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07-25-05, 07:36 AM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
bump..............................................
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07-25-05, 06:46 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
you know damn right.................................
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07-25-05, 07:58 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Drakel
Aii Chalk Aii MAn Your drop was BasicallY Waht I Expected a Diss at The Post count and A ryme with the word bitch and so On man You drop very Predictable and I think that That Is not hwo you should do it and you Had no punchez jus insults that Sound like you were fussin or somethin man BasicallY you didnt supply what I was lookin for in This battle so I couldnt give you my vote man srry Drak You know that we not the coolest peeps but if you wouldve used this verse on me then you wouldve won lol j/k ....but yeah man You really did good in this verse You dropped decent punchez good wordplay and then you had some personals so that really kicked off your verse and basically you toke this battle to the best of your ability and owned it jus like you shouldve ...I wouldve kicked yo ass if you wouldve lost this battle lol Im jus playin man anyway You dropped great Keep it up man You Talented my v/ Drak RTF in This Battle link or this vote gets removed I know you will RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201559 Its me vs CarsonJet Im up 2-0 Check the battle stats if you dont beleave me lol PLEASE RTF Drak  |
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07-25-05, 10:44 PM
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IP: 9C56 DB5A
Voted For: Drakel
chalk: ill admitt it i cant battle worth shit, 5000 posts and you still havnt elevated bitch, what do posts gotta do with elevatin? not a good punch/opening but fuck it, your about to get raped, cause i dont see your punches stickin like invisable tape, if his punches are invisible tape, then they DO stick ill kill this dude, random line, don't add this if u're over the 10 line limit leave your body worse than what your life is like,, your winning chances like, a dude in karate actually winning a fight, like rhymes with like, but not very original, and karate people can win fights put your verse in the mirror so you can reflect your loss, your verse was writtin yesterday im bustin off top, first decent punch, at least it makes sense i gatta come sick,or this fight will get worse, i know if i come whack every one will think i was bitin your verse another good punch, good closing overall- most of your punches didn't make sense, you got more than 10 lines, extra lines hurt ya flow drakel: match wits with this bitch? shit, i dont know what to say so chalk writes up his lines.....but i just brush'em away good punch/wordplay/personal now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career? doesn't hit too hard, but ok even if he wasnt queer, wouldn't listen to what this faggot called me cause im not takin anyone seriously looking like dragon ball Z nothin special, ok tho have no skills dude, you choose to write, but thats your flaw only hooks you ever put together......are putting on your bras oooooo diss, chalk wears bras whack is in his system, wishin he wasn't, but with him its a fuckin virus so is losing something you like then....or is it the luck of the irish good closing, but chalk's was better overall- better punches, good flow, makes sense, wordplay's ok, much better verse please vote on my battle w/madik http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=200158 |
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