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Daubs 0 0%
Hotshh! 5 100.00%
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Old 09-10-05, 04:10 PM   #1
Daubs
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From: Salford
Daubs vs Hotshh!

IP: 224B 2147

Battle Rules:

Livin Legendz VS The Establishment

2 day check, 2 day drop, not checking in results in a loss.

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No E-Style Votes (due to possible merge.)
No DR, just vote honestly.

600 posts to vote, Good Luck

Minimum posts to vote: 600

Check in by: 09-12-05 at 04:10 PM

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Old 09-12-05, 08:20 AM   #2
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hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 08:20 AM.
 
Old 09-12-05, 10:39 AM   #3
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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 10:39 AM.
 
Old 09-13-05, 05:33 PM   #4
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: 888C 2BD4

Look kid
I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
(uk fucker)(avy WAS bush)
 
Old 09-13-05, 05:51 PM   #5
Daubs
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From: Salford
IP: 71DB 93E1

Fuck DR, not your fault like but make sure you people vote HONESTLY..

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!

If needed:
PanIc > Pan Ice
hit the roof is an expression for angry, and the rest is simple wordplay.

Vote honestly, will RTF
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Old 09-13-05, 06:02 PM   #6
Adam
 
From: Canada
This was feedback posted for hotshh!

IP: A0C8 44A9

Both my homies. But one is crew... So go hotty go!

Hahaha, good battle you two. TE fo life..
 
Old 09-13-05, 06:03 PM   #7
Daubs
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From: Salford
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safe man, no beef anyway whatever happens.

*Points magnum in SR's face*
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Old 09-13-05, 06:27 PM   #8
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
From: Boston
This was feedback posted for Daubs

IP: 3240 794D

pollz. fam..............................................
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Old 09-13-05, 06:57 PM   #9
Dervla
Poet's Daughter.
 
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!

IP: 49AF F761

checking this out....................................
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Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
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Smartone Freal:
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Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
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Old 09-13-05, 07:06 PM   #10
Deranged
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IP: 1DF6 1B35

Voted For: hotshh!

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
5.....decent....didn't like 1st line though and how is panic=pan-ice?..
Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
6...good
Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
3...this was weak..becuz..I mean..inner child?wtf?
Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
3...no...c'mon...esspecially that 1st line..and stop with the explamation points...
hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
5...decent..nothing spectacular..but decent
I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
4...good concept with the whole hit the roof..but....sat on floor?

I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
6...good
22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
6...good...but would have hit harder if it wasn't for the set-up..if he got a good rec..don't mention it
LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
3..played..i've heard this before
"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
5...good
Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
6..hmm..good..but leaf lines are gettin played now...
Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
8...best bar in this battle..multis were nice too..

Ok..hotshh! got this.
Daubs..I thought you had some decent concepts,but ur wording was bad and so were ur set-ups.Such as the hit the roof line and the but of pistol.But then again..some lines were just based off bad concepts.Like..how is panic>pan-ice?Just like that..an E comes out of the word?And then...that snatchin kids line..now..ur concept was..touchin inner child?NO.A couple of multis in ur verse was abit forced too.

Vote-Hotshh!
Hit my battle up with 9th degree
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208431


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Old 09-13-05, 07:25 PM   #11
Sik Wit It
 
From: Florida
This was feedback posted for hotshh!

IP: 59A2 1C71

Lol, Daubs has Mimesis' structure style. :O
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Old 09-13-05, 07:50 PM   #12
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
This was feedback posted for hotshh!

IP: 2361 1E5E

This battle was fucking garbage.



I'm really hoping you guys didn't try..
 
Old 09-13-05, 07:53 PM   #13
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
IP: 2361 1E5E

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sik Wit It
Lol, Daubs has Mimesis' structure style. :O


Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
I'm being sincere.. you be followin my shit.. just payin your dues
But I'll still be callin you my boys..
..since I fathered the style you be tryin to use


Yep.. I am just a stud.
 
Old 09-13-05, 09:50 PM   #14
King Solo
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!

IP: 9DB1 64D6

close battle, hotshh! edged it in my opinion.........LMAO @ that closer....
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Old 09-13-05, 10:05 PM   #15
L.I.
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This was feedback posted for Daubs

IP: FD57 6BB0

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