Hmmm.....

Well i tried a new structure cause my old one wouldnt have a chance, and deranged,
Pan IC < wordplay, IC = ice.


Oh well.

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Uppping for you two. Get some votes in on this ish.

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Voted For: hotshh!

Daubs:

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
decent opener

Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
seen this concept before..

Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
cool

Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
nice

hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
alright

I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
decent closer

Hotshh:

Look kid
I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
decent opener

22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
dope punch..

LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
cool punch..

"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
decent

Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
nice

Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
(uk fucker)(avy WAS bush)
alright closer

Overall Vote: hotshh, he came harder with the punchlines..pretty close and good battle..

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Voted For: hotshh!

Hotshh! verse

Look kid
I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
^ hmm opener aight punch coulda been better though IMO

22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
^ it's 23-3 lol...punch aight a lil self-g though (seems like the new thing)

LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
^ good bar

"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
^ 1st line meh 2nd line aight

Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
^ rhyme basic...punch aight though

Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
^ Please UK shit played out and i ain't jus saying that personal there though

(uk fucker)(avy WAS bush)

Daubs Verse

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
^ opener a bit meh not liking the structure

Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
^ punch aight the puss/blister things kinda on popped spots = played concept

Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
^ good bar not feelin the struc but punch itself was aight

Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
^ don't get the 2nd line much to be honest wasn't feelin this much

hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
^ aight bar rhyme was aight

I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
^ lol good closer rhyme was coo name play and punch was aight best bar

Overall
Overall the main thing is consistancy...Daubs as much as you my mate and all...Hotshh got this...some bars you dropped weren't as good as Hotshh like the talkin vowels?...Hotshh had some alright bars no-1 had anything that jumped out to me IMO but i know you both are capible of droppin nice text on your good days...

V/Hotshh!

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Fair enough, Talkin vowels, I > eye, I for the women, not eyes, meaning hes gay.
basic really.

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hmm, hotshh had better punches to me....daubs was too giddy and gay....

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Voted For: hotshh!

Daubs

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
HaHa liked this rite here gud opener

Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
Okay nothing special but hit pretty gud, liked again

Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
HaHa liked this again…funny punch and gud wordplay

Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
Not feeling this one

hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
Okay not a great punch but it was creative and gud wordplay

I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
Ha okay nice way to shut up shop…..good verse overall


Hotshh

I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
nice opener gud wordplay and nice punch

22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
hahahaha loved this this hit nice man, funny, creative…dope

LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
O.k not great but o.k, clever but didn’t hit great to me

"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
HA again nice

Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
Nah not feeling this one

Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
Gotta say very nice closer


Verdict =
really close battle both of y’all did ya thing no doubt and came with impressed, funny, creative verses, both had dope flow and wordplay, however I’ve gotta give this one to hotshh just slightly more consistent and his best punches hit harder on this occasion! Dope battle though….stay up!


Vote = Hotshh!

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