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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Coming into this battle knowing this cat is feeble minded
Ignorant in the brain Wheres ya skill, no one can find it
3...meh, kind of a diss but real weak punch.
Undefined barbarian walks the streets wit his buck teeth
Late night in his moms room, he is wut lies beneath
4...funny slightly, gud concept but you didnt word it good at all.
You aint fresh to def. Just a newb learning a lesson
After this battle you nerd your win column will less-in
2...meh, weak punch.
Str8 doing damage leaving hemorages to his dead corpse
Showing no respect to the dead for his body i show no remorse
2...meh, basic shit talking and all.

OVERALL: 11/40


I'm slayin this bastard-fast, I grasp-to-smash and trash-his-ass..
I'm dividing this "MC"'s body parts like a slash-in-math!
I'm knockin'em-dead, lookin like a baby that was dropped-on-its-head..
Chopped-up-in-red, leakin-in-pounds, don't be speakin-a-sound..
MC laid on the street-with-a-round, then put him to sleep-in-the-ground!
Chopped-in-chunks while I'm droppin-this-punks..
Stoppin-this-chump, knock'em out and leavem to rot-in-my-trunk..
This lame-is-actin, enough talk, ya should have came-with-actions..
Now ya slain.. when I ripped ya frame-to-fractions!
WACK!! i'm not even gonna comment on your verse because you didn't even stick to the line limit. the limit was 8 lines and you went 9 so you lose automatically.

V/ - Mystic Chaos

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