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fraud 1 16.67%
GKillaz05 5 83.33%
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Old 10-05-05, 03:40 PM   #16
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you go Gkillaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 10-12-05, 12:09 PM   #17
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Old 10-12-05, 03:14 PM   #18
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Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime...
Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme...
3.......woulda hit better if ya said someone else besides Mike Jones..cos mike jones ain't all that lyrically.
Should be a crime to pick up a pen, puttin' ya text to rest...
Your raps are fake, the only cheese you'll make is processed...
4....decent.
Smashin' fraud like glass... my lyrical test you cant pass...
Fraud your like a student skippin'a period you got no class...
3...played.
Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek...
Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak...
4...decent punch,nice flow wit the internals
Slash this hoe, your rap flows are like a hose with a leak...
Aint runnin' smoothly, time to end this wannabe with a kink...
2...kink and leak don't rhyme...
Shut him off like a sink wash all of his shit down the drain...
Every line you write blows, like Fraud was blowin' cocaine...
3....drug lines are played as well...
Writing phoney shit... just quit it... man your a disgrace...
Threw a fan in his speaker just so he could have a fan base...
5....good
Your losin' this race, your lines are awed cuz there flawed...
Mods say your spits are fraud, because your really a broad...
2...seems like ur sayin shit just cos it rhymes...why would mods call him a fraud cos he's a broad???..makes no sense.

you want a battle you know how the story-go's
you'll get beat N put in a black N white suit like oero
1...no punch...just you threatning him.
Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’
RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you
3...forced multi there...ok punch
In dungeons I keep you, Ya wack raps I quickly damage with these spits
I just wanna know how did you ‘Get Retarded’ b4 Canibus released it??
1...this was whack.
The verse of stealth,the purpose felt, gkillah dont hurt ya self
"never ill" cuz your as bout as "sick" as people with perfect health
0...the punch here was played to death..and a lot of pointless multis there that are saying nothing.
500 degree's bars makin you melt, this aint a spiritual bout
Couldnt even win in "structure" if you had an even syllable count
2....no,even sllyable counts don't ensure perfect structure
Like "hail" I drop hard, win with a "smile" cuz im a "southstar"
gkillah you couldn't "spit hot" if "lava" was a type of "mouthwash"
2...no...set-up was irrelevant and spit hot lines are played.
Your pathetic, I flow genetic, Gkillah it's "BOLD to see
"drunkies"wouldnt like ya"bars"even if you gave away for free
2...gave what away for free?...weak punch.
I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall
Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off"
2...man,another played line...

ok...seemed to be a quick battle by both.
Fraud...
I see ur trying to incorparate multis in ya verse...but it's not working.Ur either forcing them or wreckin a good concept of a punch wit it.Try to stay away from multis for now and get used to using punches first.U also had too many played lines.All those "spit hot" and dick lines are played...
GKillaz..
Not the best shit in the world...but it was enuff..U also had played lines.You also seemed to force some internals.(ie..Your last bar)

V/Gkillaz.

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Old 10-12-05, 10:20 PM   #19
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Voted For: GKillaz05

AIGHT AIGHT


FRAUD....your shit was GOOD......NOT GREAT but GOOD.........

Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’
RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you:>>>NICE LINE

I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall
Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off"
:>>>NICE LINE ALSO.....


G KILLAH

Your flow went good.......Vocab was aight.....NOTHING SPECIAL FROM BOTH OF YOU......G ive seen better drops from you.......so come out the way THE G is suppose too homie.....

Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime...
Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme...
>>>NICE PUNCH...

Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek...
Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak...>>>>>SHIT WAS GOOD....FAV. LINE


BOTH did ya thing ya know.......but overall....to me

G won this by a lil edge......

V/GKILLAH....Better VERSE......



Nice punches...multi's and FLOW.............
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Old 10-13-05, 04:18 AM   #20
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Voted For: fraud

fraud:
you want a battle you know how the story-go's
you'll get beat N put in a black N white suit like oero
^^^DECENT OPENER...NOTHIN DAT HARD

Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’
RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you
^^^LOL FUNNY SHIT I NEVA SEEN ANY1 USE IT
In dungeons I keep you, Ya wack raps I quickly damage with these spits
I just wanna know how did you ‘Get Retarded’ b4 Canibus released it??
^^LMAOO DOPE..DAT SONG WAS HOT

The verse of stealth,the purpose felt, gkillah dont hurt ya self
"never ill" cuz your as bout as "sick" as people with perfect health
^^^UHHH NAH
500 degree's bars makin you melt, this aint a spiritual bout
Couldnt even win in "structure" if you had an even syllable count
^^OKAY
Like "hail" I drop hard, win with a "smile" cuz im a "southstar"
gkillah you couldn't "spit hot" if "lava" was a type of "mouthwash"
^^^U KIND OF FORCED DIS 2 RYHME
Your pathetic, I flow genetic, Gkillah it's "BOLD to see
"drunkies"wouldnt like ya"bars"even if you gave away for free
^^^U SHOULD OF WORDED DIS BETTA
I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall
Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off"
^^^WEAK CLOSER

gkillaz05:
Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime...
Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme...
^^^NAH
Should be a crime to pick up a pen, puttin' ya text to rest...
Your raps are fake, the only cheese you'll make is processed...
^^^LOL OKAY
Smashin' fraud like glass... my lyrical test you cant pass...
Fraud your like a student skippin'a period you got no class...
^^PLAYED...
Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek...
Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak...
^^^NO
Slash this hoe, your rap flows are like a hose with a leak...
Aint runnin' smoothly, time to end this wannabe with a kink...
^^^^NOPE
Shut him off like a sink wash all of his shit down the drain...
Every line you write blows, like Fraud was blowin' cocaine...
^^^U WORDED DIS TERRIBLE
Writing phoney shit... just quit it... man your a disgrace...
Threw a fan in his speaker just so he could have a fan base...
^^^LOL DATZ HOTT
Your losin' this race, your lines are awed cuz there flawed...
Mods say your spits are fraud, because your really a broad...
^^^NAH

v/fraud...g u had 2 hott lines da rest were wack
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Old 10-13-05, 02:17 PM   #21
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Old 10-13-05, 03:41 PM   #22
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you want a battle you know how the story-go's
you'll get beat N put in a black N white suit like oero

no, weak.

Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’
RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you

played to fuck, no.

In dungeons I keep you, Ya wack raps I quickly damage with these spits
I just wanna know how did you ‘Get Retarded’ b4 Canibus released it??

didnt rhyme well but still a good punch.

The verse of stealth,the purpose felt, gkillah dont hurt ya self
"never ill" cuz your as bout as "sick" as people with perfect health

played flip...decent flow.

500 degree's bars makin you melt, this aint a spiritual bout
Couldnt even win in "structure" if you had an even syllable count

me, not really a diss...original conceot tho.

Like "hail" I drop hard, win with a "smile" cuz im a "southstar"
gkillah you couldn't "spit hot" if "lava" was a type of "mouthwash"

nooooo...weak played concept and dint rhyme well.

Your pathetic, I flow genetic, Gkillah it's "BOLD to see
"drunkies"wouldnt like ya"bars"even if you gave away for free

again flipped played concept, was ight.

I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall
Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off"

weak rhyme good punch.

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Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime...
Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme...

ok i guess.

Should be a crime to pick up a pen, puttin' ya text to rest...
Your raps are fake, the only cheese you'll make is processed...

nice

Smashin' fraud like glass... my lyrical test you cant pass...
Fraud your like a student skippin'a period you got no class...

played concept but meh.

Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek...
Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak...

flipped pleayed concept, was ight.

Slash this hoe, your rap flows are like a hose with a leak...
Aint runnin' smoothly, time to end this wannabe with a kink...

meh...

Shut him off like a sink wash all of his shit down the drain...
Every line you write blows, like Fraud was blowin' cocaine...

no, not feelin this one

Writing phoney shit... just quit it... man your a disgrace...
Threw a fan in his speaker just so he could have a fan base...

played

Your losin' this race, your lines are awed cuz there flawed...
Mods say your spits are fraud, because your really a broad...

meh.



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Both came played, GK came less played.

V GK...

hit up my oreo battle or i will delete this vote .
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