ite,

appreciate it mate.

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Daubs MySpace

lol been waitin for thsi for time....


ite beat is too slow... you need a hyped beat kinda for disses and put more emotion into it... flow was ite slipped a few times yuor punches eere decent its a known fact dat asains have small dicks rofl...

get on msn soon as u get ome from skwl n we'll talk bout a collab

gfodo track man keep it up

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safe mate,

ima jump on msn now.

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Daubs MySpace

LMFAO yo kin folk i got this beat 2!
im listening
CHEA yo mayne ya ACCENT dont match ya TEXT lMAO
or ya features!

lyriks koo,i could barely hear whatcha sayin but hey for first sounding good so far,chea lyriks is koo,hatred'z there,flow on point could have made it a lil more longer but hey koo,quality is good!shyt yo koo drop!

Dope Drop just like dont spit as close inda mic feelme homie!

RETURN DA FAVOR in my ( FromDaHood )

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i love this beat...

i dun have a clue to anything you said except Umpa Loompa, Fuck, Murder, and Prick

Your voice is very immature, meaning that your voice is light making you sound very young and the way you rap making you sound lighter than your voice is normally.. (guessin, from how it sounds)... The thing bout your voice tho, is it's unique.. you just have to find a way to make it sound serious no one's gonna believe what you say unless you 1) be confident 2) sound serious 3) give them something they don't expect you to say. That's the advantage of your voice being unique you have to work your way into all 3 of those..

-Unique Voices on the Site Include-
You
ILL-Noise
Intermental
Drama Queen
CarsonJet
I Daughter Hoz
Artik Phrost
R Rated
Me
^^These voices stand out because of their tone.. So each have already or will hopefully to work with their voice. Just some examples so you get my point.

I have one of the lightest voices in the world if you ever heard me in a yahoo chat you'd know, but when I spit I can make it sound harsh and keep it unique without takin the feminine side out my voice or adding bass to my voice wit any edittin programs...

ya flow was eh, seems like you been freestylin for not so long, I really don't think beat compliments your voice one bit... You using so much energy in this, but it's not helpful, you tryna sound harsh wit your but now your clarity is fuckin up... And i kno it's not just your accent, because I understand quite a few UK heads on the site... but work at it and keep workin at it. I'm lookin forwards to seein you improve,
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Thanks a lot for good feed,

il defo try that stuff in my next one...
...ima fuck around with the vocals too.

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totally dis-agree... battle tracks done like that are EXTREMELY played, also using beats that have for example a really kiddy jokey vibe to them, allows for a more joking vibe on the track in your delivery and disses basically giving the vibe of "your a twat, but shits all jokes to me, ill just laugh whilst i clown you" where as what ur talking bout is like "your a fuckin cunt, you piss me off so fuckin much i wanna murder you" type shit... theres millions of ways u can approach disses e.t.c... you just need to broaden your horizons and open your mind to more creative ways of doing.

i remember when eminem released stan, in the same week my mate jacked the beat, n used the exact same concept, except to diss somebody with it, but still keep the verses like eminem did them...

anyways enough rambling, to the track

beat is shit tbh but thats personal preference...flow is better than expected, you was bein hesitant at times, delivery is shit to be blunt, you need to keep practicing n build confidence to help u to spit the right emotion, make it more interesting n shit... keep at it.. lyrically, again nothing stood out for me here but again all comes with practice.

Well it's a personal opinion, I prefer more hyped up beats when dissing someone...gets me more into the song...

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