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Old 10-24-05, 06:00 AM   #16
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Old 10-24-05, 09:51 AM   #17
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Old 10-24-05, 02:46 PM   #18
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Beats decent,

intro/hooky things on topic and sounds good...

flows safe...,

vocals bit quiet

lyrically its deep, good listen

nice track..

you mad eevated mate...stay up.
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Old 10-24-05, 02:48 PM   #19
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thanks...LMAO!! at ure pic in ure sig
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Old 10-24-05, 06:11 PM   #20
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Beat: aint feelin it at all, no hate just not my style, the chorus is not that bad, flow is cool at some places, and some parts it dosint flow, like u speed up to finish your line, not your best track but still good, get a new mic man lol could be cool, i prefer the first verse than the second, good track but aint really feelin it cuz of the beat man, no hate its just IMO
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Old 10-24-05, 07:30 PM   #21
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Old 10-25-05, 07:06 AM   #22
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thers suttin missin from the song... beat is kool... hook is a bit meh it really does sound like your whispering it agen

verses... therere kool empotion is iite coulsd be upped though quality is kool, lyrics are pretty nice, flow is on point, not bad verses man

its just missing something coz it gets a bit boring after a while u no what i mean?

overall not a bad track not your best but its an ight track mate. keep it up
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Old 10-25-05, 07:11 AM   #23
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Old 10-25-05, 07:13 AM   #24
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beat is dope....
hook: nice.......
emotional song
u r still in ur level man...gd job
but maybe ur should try something new thing....cauze ur great with these kind songs,
so i would want to hear what else u got....
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Old 10-25-05, 07:14 AM   #25
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iigh I feel u...by monday u will hear quite a bit from me...cos im at the studio....
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Old 10-28-05, 03:09 PM   #26
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Loving the beat first of all

And awwwwww @ the hook, I'ma listen to this when I'm feeling down. Sometimes I feel you tried to put too many words into one bar you know and you had to rush it here and there. But flow was pretty consistent on the entire track. Lyrics are nice too, some shit in there that people can certainly relate to. Nice type of track, I'm feeling this kind of song without a doubt. Your presence is good on it too, you sound all emo but it's cute hehe. I like your voice as well...

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Old 10-28-05, 07:41 PM   #27
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lmao at emo...thanks for the peep
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