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What Make MALICIOUS Snap Like That STROBE
IP: CF74 5D3A
What Make MALICIOUS Snap Like That STROBE
Couldn’t be a leader with general stars bitch got criminal scars Of foggy stupidity and cloggy humidity hell it don’t rain on this bazaar Clown bitch don’t rhyme good just blind wood no roots flow Absolute garbage, this bitch suspicious not MALICIOUS yo And expeditious hoe see a retard I regard as below average Bitch wanna toss salad but as boss not valid so I throw cabbage In y7our ugly face a bubbly disgrace in a pool of shit this fool Admit he’s to stupid to lead his policy is a feeble sight no school Or equal rights in what he does, why this bitch move posts hey STROBE You wear the robe share the code on how to delete this cat that drove Me nuts, why this bitch moves posts? It would behoove most Of us if this fuss just disappears, give this chump a broom as host Sweep the room and roast beef as a cook this is his true profession Look you not a work of art just a jerk not smart only know aggression Need to shower your foul body use you power foul and snotty As a moderator |
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WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
are you Maddrapper?
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IP: 3881 400B
This was barely a diss IMO...just some poorly set up multies and vocab..
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IP: CF74 5D3A
shit off the hook cats trying to play it off
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Never Around
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IP: EDF1 ACC9
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Im thinkin that too.. Sounds wack just like him |
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 0893 5074
Ok...
the problem with your verse..is that your not throwing punches.Ya got a nice,strong rhyme scheme..but a lot of times..you end up forcing it.In your verse,ur lines..either made no sense due to forcedness or rhyme scheme...or wuz just flat out weak. Only plus side to your shit is that it's unique and way different from the rest of shit people post here. Just learn to not force ya rhyme scheme. Leave some feed in my OM plz. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209018 |
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IP: CF74 5D3A
all righ thanks fo rthe props for real yall loving it
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