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Old 10-27-05, 04:44 AM   #16
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ok...I copped this jus blaze beat myself was gon spit to it.......ok u clearly a uk rapper..u accent wasn't too dominate early but it starts showing towards middle...which I aint a fan of uk accent...I always said it lacks fluidity....sounds like u fighting wit ya pronounciation to have ya words flow seemlessly together but the english way of speaking to me is naturally kaotic...sum know how to tone it down a bit u tried but not really working.........flow was basic an a tad choppy....delivery u opened wit intensity an strong..I was feeling u at jump but after first 4 bars u dropoff quickly...u lost that emotion that held my attention..I had to listen to it twice to catch lyrics cuz first listen I was jus goin thru motions..u completely lost my attention...lyrical u was ah'ight..nothing jumped out...u could flipped this topic so many ways but u took the predictable route......well all in all I wasn't feeling it, no hate son....but it jus wasn't working IMO...but stay up..u def got an upside......1


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hmmmmmmmmmmmm.......... no comment


^ Again lmao @ the RG feed stip coming into play again...but thanks though for the up
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Old 10-27-05, 06:02 AM   #17
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iite beat is ill... you kick in pretty good... flow is pretty good... i dun like the name droppin though. not a bad track though, its a banger,, uplifting track, adlibs are off in some parts.....

outro is meh though coz u aint gonna get the trophy

overall decent track, elevated in makin songs nice job
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Old 10-27-05, 06:23 AM   #18
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cheers oopin...
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Old 10-27-05, 10:25 PM   #19
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For some reason I don't like your quality...flow is coo...I think the UK accent adds to the track. Nice flow...I like lyrics, the beat is a'ight...delivery is coo...

Word, keep it up man. We gotta collab one day.

Return the favor please.

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Old 10-27-05, 11:52 PM   #20
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but i felt you did have conviction... not a complete bomb... the accent is just hard to get past a lil sometimes.. you know?
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Old 10-28-05, 01:57 AM   #21
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Am feelin the beat, original UK rapper here namsayin spittin pretty good..flow was on point..quality is iffy quality is holdin alot of kids down on this cyber world..seriously but u did ya thang B
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Old 10-28-05, 04:11 AM   #22
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For some reason I don't like your quality...


Na i know...coz i spit this at work mixing time is limited...but ye hopefully when i get my com back at home i'll have much more time to work on tracks instead of rushing them to meet deadlines and for some reason my mic isn't as clear here as at home...i think it's to do with the surroundings i unno...but thanks all so far keep droppin...ya supports greatly appreciated...also drop links if you got them
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Old 10-28-05, 10:34 AM   #23
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Old 11-01-05, 10:15 AM   #24
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Old 11-03-05, 05:38 AM   #25
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