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Old 10-28-05, 05:04 PM   #1
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Old 10-28-05, 07:29 PM   #2
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damn... no one left feed on this?... decent track here... first time listening to ya but ya decent... quality is better mine...lol... sometimes can't hear wht ya sayin but it's all good... lines flowed and gelled together well.. beat was ok.. i'd say bass it up a lil to add that deepened effect to it... good shyt... basic topic... but good shyt

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Old 10-29-05, 05:46 AM   #3
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I liked the beat


1st verse...flow was good..gud multies

delivery could stand for more presence


Leph...cud hear a lil hiss..pops....work on that quality

flow is good



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Old 10-29-05, 08:06 AM   #4
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Not really feeling the beat...got something weird bout it...

Young Montana: pretty good, your flow suits the beat, stayed quite consistent all the way through. Delivery can be better though, want more fire in it you know. Liking your voice though, lyrics are good for this type of track. This goes for both verses btw...

Young Leph: dude has a nice voice, good flow as well, delivery is bit better with him but not by much though. Lyrics are suited for this kinda song, quality is decent, flow is kinda same as the one you got, not really a lot of variation

Solid shit right here, I felt you could've put some more fire in it both of you but overall good track...
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Old 10-29-05, 09:59 AM   #5
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good lookin yall..........Uppin...
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Old 10-29-05, 12:57 PM   #6
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beat is ok...

could use better mixing ...jus a lil bit
good comercail flow type shit..lyrics is decent,not to deep but wordplay is their..
fuck bitches that fuck bitches...nice line man

2nd dude...nice voice,i think u should flow a bit faster..not a whole lota emotion their,decent lyrics,ya'll rapped through tha chorus tho...







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