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Old 11-26-05, 01:42 AM   #1
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LoL At the Beat! peep this and ill RTF ~1~
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Old 11-26-05, 02:04 AM   #2
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alright lyrics were cool but u cant be in a clit lmao better edit that lol
flow was cool off in a few spots
i luve this beat run it
i like ur voice its cool
cool track
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Old 11-26-05, 02:06 AM   #3
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xD LMFAO word i just wanted to throw some comedy in but yeh i should edit but now its too late LoL but its koo just when u hear it replace it with ( PUSSY ) :X!
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Old 11-26-05, 02:10 AM   #4
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nice beat, flow iz good, lmao @ in ya clit. koo chorus. quality could b a lil betta but its koo. voice iz koo, reminds me of sum shit i herd awhile ago on sum utha sc. kinda short, but not bad

rtf pleeze

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good looks uppin..............ill RTF also
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Old 11-26-05, 05:37 PM   #6
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Old 11-26-05, 10:27 PM   #7
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i thought u sed u were gonna rtf?

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Old 11-26-05, 11:47 PM   #8
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lmfao @ this hook.

I thought you was gonna have a noflow/herb flow. but it's good. lol, this shit is funny...shit makes up for the delivery...lyrics is basic, but i like this shit shit...lmao.

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Old 11-27-05, 01:22 PM   #9
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Damn son, your singing sucks! The vocals should get turned down like 3dB's or so. the beat's okay, it is what it is. the rhyme scheme that you spit over this beat with wasn't a fit IMO. This beat NEEDS multis in the flow in order to keep a listener from falling asleep, like if you listen to the original song, listen to how much shit is going on all over the song, flow changes, crazy-souyndin ass adlibs and all sorts of off the walls type shit, all that just to bring up the energy of the track. Your voice had a monotone sound to it as well, like you were "reading a piece of paper" - the common comparison. The lyrics are okay (the second verse I wasn't crazy about) but needed more energy while spitting regardless.
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Old 11-27-05, 02:11 PM   #10
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Listening...

Beat is coo...Gawd damn...don't sing...it was off melody...quality was ehhh...Flow was a little bit choppy...I didnt like the delivery on this either...

Overall...decent...you need to work on alotta things though...

Keep it up.
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Old 11-30-05, 07:03 PM   #11
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LMFAO word man i dont sing so chea that was a ( SHUT THE FUCK UP ) in some peeps mind but good looks and sorry i will RTF ive been bizzy!
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nice sound but theres a lot to be desired with the flow. no originality.
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Old 12-02-05, 01:20 AM   #13
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