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This pathetical slaughter is in alphabetical order under attack
Like politicians on missions I’m criticize severely the facts
Wise and clearly available like news paper articles particles
Of truth still prevail without fail lots of crack in my vicinity
Time to track the enemy rap to cats an act to find a remedy
Attached to a group and dispatch troops like an army of harmony
Priced like sensitive material expensive lyrical are very stormy
So take out your bill fold and pay for these ill scrolls dawg
My scheme bold like extreme cold make cats shiver
Body reflex shaky complex and achy sensations quiver
No heat my flow unique, I go into streets with a river
Of rhymes like a stream of water scream and slaughter
Completely drown clowns have them stuck out on the altar
On a raised structure blaze this culture give sacrifice to god
Christ among men makes them nice from within because sin is odd

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11-27-05, 09:16 PM #2
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Upping For Responses Yall

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11-27-05, 11:14 PM #3
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This isnt that great and very generic
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Yesterday, 05:45 PM #4
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i thought it was ok, nothing really special. Vocab was cool for me, structure was fine but other than that it was just a regular piece.
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quick to blast fools with steel tools lay u up in a black herse
cuz the gats burst u have a choice do u wanna be last or first

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Today, 11:36 AM #5
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hey yall thanks for the props and critique for real

my link (http

I think this dude is maddrapper.

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naw just somebody who knows how to r5ap yall two rookies stop hating and try to rhyme

HI MY NAME IS SPEATS

Yo I Try To Fly High My Eyes Dry
My Multis Sick Spit Bitch Liquid
I Kick Kids In This Bigger Site
Im GladBag That Fag Who Cant Rhyme words together and cuz he sucks!!!

^^this is how you sound, putting anything together you know and it dosing make sens

A'cred is already in the process of banning him.

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hey MENTALZ YOU SUCK SON YOU TALK ABOUT BANNING AND WHERE THE FUCK IS YOUR RHYMES? THESE TWO CATS NOT ON MY LEVEL AT ALL

sup bro, i like you and i think you got talent but in some ways this is great in others its not.

Your vocab and rhyming was good, the multies were good and the structure was easy to the eye. It was a nice peice but im yet to see wat the topic was.

There wasnt much consistency to the peice, altho it was good i couldnt follow it well.

In that way this was your worst peice as the others followed better. Ignore haters cos they cant offer constructive criticism only bullshit hating.

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Gladbag, ya flow is like some 1950's history tape, it's borin, nothin special, bullshit, your retarded, stop preachin and leave the site...

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