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The Topical Juggernaut
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.:Third Crusade:. What if I told you secretly, that for five years of straight fued ...Two tactical minds would collide in holy hate & revenue... "It's only fate!" proclaimed the pope Urban the Second The Holy War at its most virulent point in attempts to be effective Correct it, The Holy Land was a fiercely contested battlefield neglected Shielded soldiers weilded religion as reason's to slaughter Fought over by Muslim and Christian armies, zealots and assassins. Ever active in attackin' in the name of god's will & passion. ...Savage 'morbid' lynguistics, from putrid infidels to simplistics... But get this: two renowned figures errupted from the 'sickness' ...Richard the Lionheart, then King of England, versus Content... The European cursed Sultan Saladin. Savior of Alah's profits. Contenued conflict, as Creators names portrayed an' held High As the Warriors of God collide an' explode in the night's sky It's lifes cry... An excuse to conquer the proper and slaughter As Son's and Daughters prosper from the gift the Angel of Death offer's. .:Richard the Lionheart:. I was born on September 8, 1157, & was enthroned in 1172. King to few, for kingdoms are run from poverty to including fueds. I spent a few, years... in twining my mind in proper sanction Until I felt the urge to splurge and collide with the Muslim Nation Subtle & Patient. I tried to fight for whats right, coincide with my God But alas. I guess my God's a fraud because we lost it to Alah's stance. I crawled intranced, with my lance on point and justly in order Up until Saladin strode his army up to the Husky Holy Border Now I'm Older. I think back to the Third Crusade's parade of Shambles. I understand the gambles placed by the Christian race in despising haste It's "describing fate". Yah, suprising state we were in b/c of the Irate. I taste my soul, & watch it falter and alter at the altar & in roll... For when I died April 6, 1199, from a wound in the Limousin. I realized the forsaken choice in the poise of the pope's engrossed poison. .:Saladin:. I was born in 1137 a scholar, and died, March 4, 1193 a Muslim Hero. It was never my intentions to be resurrected from zero's standing. To commanding demanding folks to Jerusalem's unspoken ranting Panting, as I counter the thunder from the 'powder' cowards ...Louder, as the vibrant encounters eclipse religions poison shower... Poised to cower, during the First Crusades grasp of the city... ...Doomed to loom in utter control as we stroll in self pity... It's shitty... but in the end my men fought & won the city's hold We were bold enough to hold the corrupted assassins death toll Wept for the soul, it's what I did in the end, & whitnessed canty Scripted sanity & so the Muslim Nation still holds it in strict tenacity. This is a glimpse on the outlook of each legendary leader, Richard and Saladin during the Third Crusade.
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this was a nasty drop i did one on a very similar topical before, ima post it but pertainin to your drop structure and topic choice was dope... and the flow held its own highlight: King to few, for kingdoms are run from poverty to including fueds. I spent a few, years... in twining my mind in proper sanction Until I felt the urge to splurge and collide with the Muslim Nation Subtle & Patient. I tried to fight for whats right, coincide with my God ^sick....nice relation to history and narration held key... `1 |
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The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: CCF3 0222
Thanks for the feed bro, leave a link or two an' 'll hit it up.
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NO SURRENDER
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I will stick to what i say, this shows your CS's best head...
Flow was consistant and solid, you stuck to the concept well throughout, vocab was advanced throughout.] I also like the advanced rhyming scheme, not one sylable shit on every line. Hit up link in my sig please. Richard and lionheart sect was my favorite, that was top, ill rhyming and the concept was completely pulled off..
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Got you after I get back from the movies with my wife bro, thanks for the feed.
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: F709 2013
This was a historical piece.
Literally lol You stuck on topic the whole way which was impressive. You had good imagery and kept to the concept well. I love how you used enhanced vocab but not to much so the flow was choppy. Nice emotion and facts for this topic. Deff one to remember man overall 8/10 keep ya shit up. Favor Returned.
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IP: 3240 794D
Wow...nice drop didnt expect it but it was a nice ass drop...
Had a good concept stick to it and all...Vocab was good n all... You also had good Imagrey ...And also had a decent flow... But overall- 8.5/10 ...Nice ass drop ...Keep it up ...
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IP: 2029 97B3
damn history class wut u'd think of our lesson?...lmmao shit was a hot drop man all the way through good vocab,nice flow i was definetly imagining this shit while reading nice concept keep up yo shit n keep postin peace
u should holla at me 4 a collaboration peace..oh by the way peep my newest drop.....i got a few older ones but they da 3rd list in om |
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 48D1 F0BF
ha dope drop man
the structure on all was good drop was pretty good had me readin and readin iw as into the lyriks into the flow man i lked thie piece prety good im feeling this piece ~1~
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The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: 3503 ECC4
Uppin' for abit more feed.
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IP: 0B77 CF88
dayum good shit here....liked it.....
you stuck with high vocab and consistency in lines sometimes u sacrificed flow a lil' but it was still good due 2 tha content... Saladin waz my fav....Lots of rhyming words,, almost multis in it and it flowed with perfection
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The Topical Juggernaut
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uppin for some more feed, appreciate it.
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Uppin' one last time, appreciate the feed thus far.
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