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Old 01-03-06, 03:09 PM   #1
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re recording with better quality
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Old 01-03-06, 03:11 PM   #2
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Old 01-03-06, 03:58 PM   #3
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aight i got you

First Verse - Ya flwo is nice as hell.. but i dont think your saying anything to much.. you know ? if you had more meaningful lyrics i think you would be a nice head .. just spit whats real man..

what ever is you spit.. i got the impression you were going for the hard edge and shit.. and for some reason iunno if thats you =/ ..
but for real.. ya flow is nice.. i love fast flow thats actually hit some kind of rhythm and works.. just work on more creative and original lyrics..

not a bad drop.. decent actually.. keep droppin man..
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Old 01-03-06, 04:01 PM   #4
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werd thanx fer tha feed and ill take that advise .............................bump
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Old 01-04-06, 03:48 PM   #5
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bump bump.....................
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Old 01-04-06, 04:49 PM   #6
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Aighh
beats nice


delvierys koo

Flows good acutally

emotion need a lil uppin

qualitys bad tho lol

lyrics are aiggghh,should be upped

hook should stand out though

2nd verse im feelin much more lol i dunno y

deliverys better

shiiittt i cant believe u new to audio loool

You elevating really well!!!

Overall:7/10

keep the fucc up!!

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Old 01-04-06, 05:12 PM   #7
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the flow was good and the emotion fit that type of song.lyrics could have been better but to me the song just should have been longer then it was i mean i know you were rapping fast but another 3 or 4 bars couldnt of hurt the song only make it better. yeah i would give that 7/10.
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Old 01-04-06, 05:13 PM   #8
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werd yall thanx fer tha feed uppin thius
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Old 01-04-06, 06:09 PM   #9
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yo dont u hate that fuckin line by line feed lol anywayz my man got good flow i de like to see how u would be on a story tellin track lettin ya mind free to just wander on a beat man ,.......find that beat that makes u feel like holy shit i have to spit on this and ya best music comes from it
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