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02-03-06, 04:57 PM | #1 | |||||||
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FEATURED TRACK Feb 9-16:What You're Hearing (Snypa & Trakk Star)
IP: B75A 6304
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2643713 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2643715 LINK TO TRACK www.soundclick.com/snypaakarooftop its called What You're Hearing leave feed, ill RTF
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02-03-06, 11:27 PM | #2 | |||||||
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bbbuuuummmmmmmmmpppp
wake up
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02-04-06, 06:17 AM | #3 | |||||||
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Dont copy my song names!
the beat aint called "What u hearing" i will leave feed later n geto ur track done today if i can Edit: yeah trakk flows dope,really improvin deliverys koo presence is nice feelin ur energy hmmm lyrics atre koo good verse snypa flows good feelin ur delivery emotions kooo good shit!
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02-04-06, 11:52 AM | #4 | |||||||
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well then wuts the beat called then??? cuz thats the name Trakk gave me
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02-04-06, 01:14 PM | #5 | |||||||
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cause i sent it to him when i saved it as "waht u hearing"instrumental
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02-04-06, 01:15 PM | #6 | |||||
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then dont save it like dat foo
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02-04-06, 01:21 PM | #7 | |||||||
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aiight whatever man...same shit, different tracks....but the other track that u supposed to do UNF, would be greatly appreciated..lmfao
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02-04-06, 04:22 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 9CC5 0E86
bbbuuuuummmmmppppppppppppp
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02-04-06, 06:04 PM | #9 | |||||
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trak starr:
I like your voice a lot. but you lack delivery, you need to delivery more hard man, flex your voice a bit if you want or just scream it a little more to fit the beat. your lyrics were good and so was your flow. overall it was decent. snypa: you shoulda upped your vocals a bit more to stay on a level with traks because yours are even low for the beat as well. but anyway I thought you had a decent delivery and a good flow. lyrics were staight and pretty much you did a nice job. overall decent track. 1
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02-04-06, 06:49 PM | #10 | |||||
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feelin the beat... first verse: a lil bit hard to understand at parts... sounded like you might have kind of held back a little bit second verse: you sound distant for some reason, but this verse is prolly a lil bit stronger... flowed well on the beat for the most part, especially at the beginning... nice punches... nice metas... overall 7.5/10 nice track...
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02-05-06, 01:05 AM | #11 | |||||
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02-05-06, 01:20 PM | #12 | |||||||
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Trakk Star - You had a good flow, you used good emotion, your had good quality, some rhymes where sick, overall good verse.
8/10 Snypa - You had a good verse as well, liked that coke lines rhyme, it was dope!.. lol, you had good flow, and it was good. 8.5/10 OVERALL - This was a pretty good track I liked the flow, it had a good quality, keep it up guys. 8/10
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02-05-06, 01:21 PM | #13 | |||||
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werd thanx fer tha feed preciate it................
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02-05-06, 07:29 PM | #14 | |||||
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bumped............................................ .....
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02-06-06, 09:17 AM | #15 | ||||
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had a str8 verse..good smooth flow..nice cool deliverly..lyrics and shit seemed nice to me from what i heard..a cool verse 2nd dude..same as above really..again nice flow...shit worked well with the beat..nice punches and stuff good track lads RTF on my new ones |
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