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Old 06-09-06, 10:58 PM   #16
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no doubt......... preciate the feed yall..........


and q....... it wasnt no disrespect toward you .... i'll mind that next time
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Old 06-10-06, 12:39 AM   #17
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Old 06-10-06, 01:49 AM   #18
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lmfao @ the hook.
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Old 06-10-06, 02:26 AM   #19
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beat straight west coast


first dude - i like his flow a lilbit. slurrin your rhymin words a lil bit.

chorus - eh - its aight

Tito - When you came in, you come in good. adlibs is real real nice. like the rhyme scheme. best verse on track.

third verse - eh, your flow is shaky. rhymin words arent really getting my head bobbin you know ? just work on the flow of your verse. you'll be straight.

over all an aight track. chorus lyrically was bringin it down a lil bit. but aight drop. 5'sh/10
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Old 06-10-06, 05:30 AM   #20
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first dude was ok...fell off tword the end...should have punched in

second dude rapped about gay things...like gargling semen..."lips around my dick"...and "ur getting hard with this"...wtf...please stop rapping...garabge...and fuck a adlib...ur production skillz wont get past someone with a good ear for content

3rd dude same mainstream bullshit flow...boring..."speaking real talk"...when ur whole verse was dissing what your doing by posting this track...cheezy

p.s. i thought this was suppost to be a RV diss....you know like we would hear some names called out...instead it was a diss directed tword the entire site or whoever posts music on internet rap boards...so in a way...you were kinda dissin yourselves on ur own track

the best thing about the song is the hook...HA

and if anyone is hating on my opinion...you know like thinking some random person is hating on their music...call me out in a battle...im not like these kids on here judging or hating on other emcees tracks...i speak on what i know about
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Old 06-10-06, 06:04 AM   #21
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^^^ leady just calling shit how he sees it, and i see where he is coming from...don't completely agree but i see his points...on the other hand, Ysdat is just bitched up about board arguments and seen a opportunity so decided to talk trash.....thats wusup w feed for my verse as i see it, can't speak for others.


you dont need to agree, i mean afterall everybody has their own opinions, people know me by now and i think have started to accept that no matter my views on a person, i allways tell it how it i see it, i got respect for anybody as an artist, but that doesnt mean i respect them as a person get me, anyways uppin for these guys to get sum feed.
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Old 06-10-06, 09:29 AM   #22
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Old 06-10-06, 03:25 PM   #23
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This was...pac and biggie collabin thats just unfuckable wit it..haha

Cho- came tru nice...quality is upped b and u gettin so freaking comfortable on the mic wow....some nice lines here and there...

El Padrino- i have to say teach me how the fuck u do yo addlibs..lol am lovin it..man...

Hook- is nice...but not catchy...but i think since its just an rv diss instead of a deep song ya'll intentions was not to make it catchy...

overall well done yaddadadameannnnnnnn
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Old 06-11-06, 02:13 AM   #24
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1st verse: Dope line was "now it's OYD, to hell with the other crews" only cuz it's so true. Only people getting feed is OYD from mostly OYD.

Hook: WEAK

2nd verse: semen wordplay = played. I liked your flow n' energy, but really generic.

Hook: Who did this? It's lame....am I not RV? lol

3rd verse: this guy had the best verse, flow fell off a bit n' was awkward, but lyrically it was the best....

overall: wtf did the juggernaut sample have to do with anything, seemed like y'all put it on for the fuck of it. beat choice was kinda boring. pretty lame diss cuz y'all only mentioned like 1 or 2 names.
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Old 06-11-06, 03:10 AM   #25
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ok ok ok
cho your flow is good, for the most part it is. your dubs are off though man. one thing I noticed you hardly dissed anyone, you babbled on to much man. Get more lyrical and diss some faggots man, make it really mean somin.

the hook was really pathetic, no offense but it didn't make sense. "your not rv" wtf does that mean? and it was off snare in the 2nd hook.

tito man, your voice is mad ill, but you didn't diss anyone, I'd expect you to diss me but you didn't. You had nothin but g-unit type lyrics, like nothin was goin around lyrically.

last cat, not bad but as well nothin goin on lyrically, no punches. Not many people mentioned either.

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Old 06-11-06, 07:54 PM   #26
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Paranoid... lol... you juss mad cuz you got DROPPED from the roster....

dont take it personal.... its Business.... lol....

you shouldnt slap a lion in the face if you dont want your arm chewed off.... so i suggest you calm your overzealous ass the fuck down and play your position lil nigga...


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Old 06-11-06, 11:36 PM   #27
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The first verse wasnt all that good. Nice choice of beat,but the hook ruined it.
The lyrics wasnt all that good,i guess it flowed ok.

Not a very good diss track in my opinion tho.
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