im ready to rip the script! holla

my winlist is endless, your winless so end this
witnessless, unless forensics, get in this
leave bitches, deminished, while this kids replenished
i begin this and finish, your wishlist im in it
wishin u can see like me, emcee like me, be like me
hear everyone around talkin bout, she like me, he like me
we likely, start straight rippin~the~tacks, gettin~the~macs
just givin~the~facts, i really be wippin~a~MAX
cuz IMA pimp~wit~the~hat, ordo abacho gettin~at~that
the crew who refuses to lose and chooses the dues
if this dude is all rude we'll be the ones wit the attitude
dont get us mad~at~u, murkin's what we have~to~do
dont run after~fools, show up at your crib and blast~the~tools
money gettin pistolmatec, dunny get the steppin fo we letem have it
i like nymphomaniacs, if i see a bitches ass ill grab it, a lota draztic
shit goin on so im goin spastic, gonna rip on a song then im gonna blast it
sysem thumpin, bumpin in the trunk n, 180 on the dash~kid
fow everlastin, im just talkin out my ass~n~ im just sittin here laughen
style unmatchable, skills to hatd to see or even get a taste
battle tactical, a one on one wit me will just be a waste
im out of site face to face, so out of this world im past outerspace

I think the flow is tremendous.
But in the beginning... I don't know.
I'd say this is something that works better as an audio piece.
When you really break it down lyrically, particularly the beginning. It's spinning its wheels like mad but the words don't actually mean anything. And towards the end, the bars lengthen a little which is counterproductive to the style I was feeling.
But right in the middle, it all works well.
I think you definitely have talent though.
Keep it up.

im not sure what u mean by anything not meaning anything. although i do know what your sayin other than that. this was made for using outloud and not in text but i figured it would show some of yall my style. thanks for the feedback.1

no doubt.holla

uppin

2 replies other than my 5, come on now