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02-27-03, 09:27 AM
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The Golden Chyld
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...FeaR of LovE...
IP: E716 7F87
I used to stare at tha sky and wonder why I couldn't fly
Dreams of a young guy rejected cuz I denied a slice of Apple Pie Id cry, I was hated juss cuz I didn't wanna live tha 'Merican Dream Everythin' seemed like I was stranded on a log headin' down stream Feared tha high beam, Afraid of heights, Thought I'd be carried by luv But found it liked to shove, Never knew peace, Only seen fake doves I was a few steps above, Hell, But many below tha gates of Heaven It got worse when I realized, My luv used my weakness as a weapon So I let it go, I didn't know how I'd be one to let luv grow Couldn't come in precision wit tha flow, Thought I had it mastered....No Tha signs tried to show me I needed my luv time and time again Then I finally let go of tha bottle, And fell back in luv wit my pen |
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03-29-03, 03:04 PM
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The Golden Chyld
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IP: 5468 DB1D
Uppin....Peace
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03-29-03, 05:12 PM
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WarLord
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IP: 6247 8F64
YO Nicely done flowed constanly and contend was nice.....
Holla check mine USA VS IRAQ poem
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I Came Back Like Bustin Nuts On Spinal Chords Try Me Mofuckaz............ |
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03-29-03, 09:35 PM
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IP: 5153 3B92
that was nice
Couldn't come in precision wit tha flow, Thought I had it mastered....No Tha signs tried to show me I needed my luv time and time again Then I finally let go of tha bottle, And fell back in luv wit my pen nice drop... |
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03-30-03, 10:03 AM
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Narcelus Flawless
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IP: 27EA 5505
that shit was nice..deep and fulla emotions...every drop you do is iller than the next dunny...keep doin what your doin..peep my poem called talking To Myself...one
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03-30-03, 01:27 PM
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IP: D2F9 C3F6
was nice... not bad of a drop.......
i loved the topic of this...haha... started of like this was bout a chick and shit...but ended up bout a pen and writ'n... haha... I was a few steps above, Hell, But many below tha gates of Heaven ^best line... you's a true lyricist... *(chant'n...)* mentill and pen sitt'n in a tree... k-i-s-s-i-n-g................. damn forgot the rest........... |
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