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10-02-06, 02:15 AM | #1 | ||||
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Dear Others=Hitchcock
IP: 6D77 93CD
+Hitchcock+
Dear others,...i know you gon hate me Because I'm sick, and you can't wait to waiste me Gimme a half an hour, and i might just beat you Silly wit the shanks, and you know what the heat do Niggas who think im playin, well they can leak too A couple bars and you stuffed in Jar {beat drops} +Hitchcock+ You got a question, but you aint really bout nothin you really bout frontin, keep ya silly mouth buttoned I spit stiflin heat, ya cycles defeat I added a few pages, and made the Bible complete I took my time, and cooked up my rhymes This shit i stewed up, get you bruised up The industry robbin they souls, and stealin they health These masturbating MC's is just feelin they self I went from photo's for promos, to polo's wit logos Fuck coco puffs, these niggas loco for homo's No, no, i aint on that homophobe shit I just like a cool bitch, who can suck a full dick Flesh is fleeting, but a legacy's forever All about that cash, it betta be the chedda Go in the studio, get the melodies togetha Fuck wit me? I got more arms than a centipede remember? Most niggas is not ballin, they salaries sparse Its fucked up, but guess what, Reality's Harsh Ya'll just kids' playin wit ya toys in the park I'll sparc, pierce the dark and leave a void in ya heart Shit aint no comedy when niggas wanna act funny Rob they own fam, for Plat teeth and crack money But fuck it, the plubic, they told me to shove it So fuck yall too, i'll run yall through Cuz my joints is way hotter than the ones yall do You mighta came tough, but you still a lame duck Get on a stairmaster, nicca step ya game UP The flow sick...hmmmm bubonic in fact The weakest mc's talk the most, how ironic is that? Life's like a game a cards, and im likin it man I got dealt the King of Spades wit a mic in his hand On another note, the beef keep me movin about The peanut butter bullets get stuck to the roof of ya mouth Hitch spit enough heat to put you fools in a drought And me?....the game just can't be doin with out {Bridge} Eh, man im tired of yall pricks disprectin me for no damn reason ya mean. So i think its time we end this right now. I got this new bitch, that suck whatever i want. So....basically yall can get off my nuts. +Hitchcock+ Bein humble is lame, so in a couple of frames Ima burst in this shit and straight rupture the game You get in trouble wit me, get chastized wit slugs Its Hitchcock, the only rapper to be Baptized in blood...dear others
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10-02-06, 02:17 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 6D77 93CD
heres them links..............
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=232859 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=235252
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10-02-06, 12:12 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 6D77 93CD
uuuuuuuuuupppin this joint mayn..............................
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10-03-06, 12:39 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 6D77 93CD
uuuuuuuuuupppin this joint mayn..............................
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10-04-06, 11:08 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 6D77 93CD
uuuuuuuuuupppin this joint mayn..............................
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10-07-06, 12:39 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: ED1B EEB1
uuuuuuuuuupppin this joint mayn..............................
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10-10-06, 12:39 AM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 6D77 93CD
uuuuuuuuuupppin this joint mayn..............................
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10-11-06, 01:43 AM | #8 | ||||
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IP: 6D77 93CD
uuuuuuuuuupppin this joint mayn..............................
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10-11-06, 09:38 AM | #9 | ||||
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its ok but ya rhyme scheme is so basic.
some of ya bars dont add up to par but apart from tha it was ok |
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10-11-06, 11:18 AM | #10 | ||||
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IP: 6D77 93CD
ight thanks for the feed, uppin this shit again.............
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10-12-06, 12:27 AM | #11 | |||||
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Not bad man, sounds more liek somin you'd do for a song, not really like a open mic type thing. the flow and multi's are cool but you lack creativty dude. I'd like to see either a more explosive story or add some metaphor's or multiples counted with syllables. The overall piece was decent, it just sounds more like a real song you know, possibly even a simple freestyle I could do off the top of my head. Anyway decent job just try to take some consideration to extending your vocabulary, creativty and imagery.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235871
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10-17-06, 12:47 AM | #12 | ||||||
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IP: C82D E8C0
good verses... keep spittin
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10-17-06, 04:08 AM | #13 | ||||||
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IP: D40E 67D5
nice due up...could put a bit more better multies together but overall nicely done!.
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10-17-06, 01:09 PM | #14 | ||||
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IP: 6D77 93CD
ight thanks for the feed, uppin this shit again.............
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10-22-06, 07:45 PM | #15 | ||||
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IP: 6D77 93CD
ight thanks for the feed, uppin this shit again.............
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