ya imma wear protection/
ur a pussy with a yeast infection/
thats not it tho, u got the whole collection/
that two for one sale/
u gots the STD/
the HIV/
jus buy one and get one free/
bitch iv seen u at work/
u work of them poles/
wit all them other hoes/
just stripin of cloth/
fuckin every nigga that gets in ur way/
even if their gay/
still on sale...

that was really bad.. ya need some serious elevatin'.... longer lines, more complexity (lyrically, and in the rhyme), up the vocab a-li'l...

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Oye Cuba my mang.......OK for a first time.....U have to work on making the words flow better and maybe alittle more content.....Try posting in the cypher section and work on your skills pana.......Holla