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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
01-12-07, 09:43 PM
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New to RV
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New Joint!
IP: 5233 1886
Trouble
check this one called Trouble. Hit me back up for what yall think. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3134790 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239235 |
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01-13-07, 02:57 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 2B95 0529
beat kinda reminds me of money in the bank
delivery is pretty monotone flow is on but it could be smoother rhyme scheme is really basic adlibs dont stnad out put a delat on the hook or somethin
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01-13-07, 12:53 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 03DF 4D95
aint my type of beat. but its koo.. yea flow is a lil basic, get some emotion mannn lol put some umff in ya voice.. sounds like u readin..
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01-14-07, 05:47 AM
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One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
hey man, yeerr basically what those other two've said..sounds like ya holdin back abit from the mic or somethin, nd does get abit monotonous after a while..try putting more energy into it..having said that the flow was good, and the beat wasnt all that bad...keep elevatin man
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