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03-11-03, 09:36 PM
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have i got what it takes?
IP: 37BF F3FF
truth scares me
how can it be i know i'm blind yet i see my spirit in chains as my souls racked with pain like a horse thats lame just put me down and if i rise again then hear the sound of the bass pound just like a heart beat would i kiss gods feet? or would he tell me to rise cos he despises me? is it reality or a lack of symmetry i feel would i share my last meal if i knew what it was or lie cheat and break laws what are the new commandments its outlandish in the few moments of this ish thousands will die their souls depart families break apart but i'm still hungry for money and its strange see i find it funny humorous and ironic not tricky i have more than i'll ever know _______________________________ i appreciate comments |
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03-11-03, 09:46 PM
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IP: 37BF F3FF
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/new...&threadid=33419
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6213#post316213 Last edited by thunder : 03-11-03 at 09:51 PM. |
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03-12-03, 01:44 AM
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is pretty good
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Soft focus Whats the point of living? The voices in my head Feat. Rule Unlikely Alias More Comming soon! |
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03-12-03, 09:51 AM
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Not bad yo.
Poetic, should take it down to 'poetic scriptures' thread... Keep workin... respect. |
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03-13-03, 03:17 AM
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IP: 2E16 527B
yeeeah yeeah yeeah
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03-13-03, 03:19 AM
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IP: 7FEB 4053
sup homie....that was preety ill....i luv the poetry.....mad props
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