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04-27-07, 01:19 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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Champion Feat. Ransum
IP: 2742 228A
[Shiest]
I get change, get money get paper get honeys... Got Rich, Got Throwed, Got Honeys from the money Big Trucks, Big Bucks, Big Checks, With a clutch With snub? from above? From a what? From the Dutch ...So I say... It's mission time: Reload it, cock it, and let it BANG!... Then we let it clock, let it rock like chea! yea! yea! yea! Fo'real, Don't act like a hero or the bullets will Slang leaving all the collisuem screaming Yea! yea! yea! yea! Shiest (chorus) Champion! you Fucks Can't Touch me I am Holy Field with the Belt... ...So you fucks Can't Touch me I am Conan with the snub... So Your Swords can't Drop me I can be an Action Star just like Rocky... [Ransum] Bullets squirt at spleens till they put a pic of it on "believe it or not" squeezing a glock till niggas talk funny like they got helium gut's.... you seen me sluts?, i wet ya acc up from back to front and put the pump in ya mouth like a asthma pump... then cop'll come, then they throu up they lunch an take it to the roof an see who wanna jump.... its ransum dummys i aint looking for knockladge but im smart enough to leave to asian alone.... ...every since they shot up the college.... mother fuckahs im paying for my food next time..... hahahahaha... Shiest (chorus) Champion! you Fucks Can't Touch me I am Holy Field with the Belt... ...So you fucks Can't Touch me I am Conan with the snub... So Your Swords can't Drop me I can be an Action Star just like Rocky... [Shiest] Props to the niggas, Props to the Don... Props to the body dumped on the front lawns Props to the nigga with the 4-5 or the semi Yes the semis really heavy... ...Thats fo'sheezy now Get ready To get more head on your dick then Somalians Big Brains, Big Strain as my nuts start Bustin' in. I'll make the Daisy go, the Daisy in the heat of Drama Bullets rhythm hard... ...To make your heart do the fucking La Bamba.
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04-27-07, 01:31 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: 2742 228A
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3163080
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3163083
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04-27-07, 02:32 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 33E3 44D7
this was iight... not my type... unless it's straight off top... but it flowed nicely over tha beat I was listenin to so fuck it stay up n get at me
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04-28-07, 02:37 PM
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IP: 26FC 8E94
this was nice i like the whole concept and writtens....but it was too short to me maybe one or two more verses would have made it better....good job though ~1~
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05-01-07, 09:27 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: AC57 CF12
thanks for the feed back ya....
it was off-top.... but ya know we def gonna do another collabo in the future... nice verse big up shiest for holding it down.... |
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05-02-07, 10:41 AM
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Better THAN You!
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IP: 36A6 582C
Eh...it had some nice potential... iliked the beggining flow but afterwards it kinda fell off... its like you quit trying at one point and the choruse could be worked on... its a hoook yea but its kinda repetative even for that...like just the whole feeling is like your just saying it...also work on a little more complexity..i know you can only add so much to certain things but you know put a little wordplay and such...good stuff...stay up..
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