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07-05-07, 02:41 AM | #1 | ||||||
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IP: 841F 9CFE
hi this is my first post
jus sumthin i wrote recently i feel that im wrapped, my thoughts arent strapped i came with a mask, jus to get the last laugh right now im lively, they tried to deprive me of who i really am, but i thank you kindly i walk too brightly, dark shadows inside me you couldn't see it if u brought the sun down beside me i'll put it to u lightly, don't strive to revise me aspire and i i'll award you silence, now proceed on quietly i was born with a weakness, unaaware of the pain it brings all i want is freedom, but why does the caged bird sing? i have no positive decisions, whether its fact or opiniion one little incision could blur the view of my vision and im not kiddin, my genuine ideas are hidden thats the aftermath wen we all try to fit in now im forbidden, to unleash my inner villain stricken with despise in disguise to fool the creator's eyes i talk with size, but now its time for me to conceive my virtuous past leads to my high expectancies and boldly, i wont deny that im a hypocrite sometimes i speak without thought, and can't commit to it but im not the only misfit, wen it comes to confusion we all tend to lose a battle to these illusions |
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07-05-07, 02:42 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 841F 9CFE
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07-05-07, 02:45 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C14E F834
damm nice one mangg. sum parts are kinda idk, but mostly it was really good. you had really nice wordplay i think. im feelin dis alot man 7/10. keep writing homboi. youl be really good.
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07-07-07, 09:23 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 26FC 8E94
real nice....i understand what u saying.....topic was on point....keep writing man ~1~
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07-24-07, 06:23 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: DB1C 4B69
Really nice i wanna see sum more shit like this it was really impressive!
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07-29-07, 03:24 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: D657 40A2
this was good..you where right to the point
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